Lyrics In A Bottle

The oceans torrent takes it there,
my writing mingles with open water.
Hope won't diminish the essence of you,
still you are kept from washing up onto the shore.
Mercilessness it was keen in keeping you from me,
I prayed my warmth would replace the cold.
Your breath has ceased but love won't vacate,
forever the words I wrote will linger through death.
The shipwreck of your feat won't lay dormant through time,
from the shore I'd cast it, the written journey of you and I.
My lyrics have secured a place that crosses beyond,
Its song echoes music through the depths
as the waves take my chorus to where you rest.
I stand on the sand and wave them out of sight,
as the Ocean's tune hums my final goodbye.

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Comments
Wow wow wow, your words like Sara's, fall gracefully into the heart of the ocean filling every drop with love, such an amazing poem, thank you so much for sharing and for introducing me to Sara.
And wow back at you for such wonderful feedback. I've done a lot of writing about the Ocean and Yesterday as I sat on the sand, this one just had to be written. Blessings.
Hi SUSAN!!......I have but a phrase to offer here...... Melancholy beauty sets sail upon the ocean of love's final chapter!!....... gorgeous offering my friend.......ALL STARS!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo
Hi Tony, you amaze me because your feedback gives each writer the feeling of achievement, your phrases and comments that you give back are as awesome as your writing. You are a shining star on this sight X