Poem -
ME
I love looking at the mirror
Because I love what I see
each time I look into the mirror
Don't ask me why, but I love me
Don't call me a narcissist
Don't think I'm selfish
I just want to be a realist
I'm God's handiwork...astonish!
Yeah...I'm a creature of God
Fearfully and wonderfully made
I am not perfect, that's not odd
I have my flaws, I don't understimate
That won't make me feel worthless
That won't make me belittle myself
That won't make me feel useless
That won't make me feel depressed
I also got my strengths and capabilities
That shouldn't make me arrogant
But should make me have responsibilities
Though I'm not the most elegant
But seriously...I'm in love with Me!?
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YES!!..Your ROSE-NESS!!.....This is awesome for about a thousand reasons!!.......beautifully written in timing, rhythm, and formatting.......but the subject matter is "Balls to the Wall!" fantastic.......the phrasing utterly humble in its non-arrogant timber......I can't believe I didn't think of this first!! (LOL!!)......I LOVE EVERTYTHING about this write......gotta PIN this so I can read it to myself from time to time!! (smilez)......you're so damn cool girlfriend!!......smokin' grooves!!........LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xoΒ Β ?
Yaay!!...I'm glad you love everything about my write...your words have made day...I'm honoured to know you're pinning this...Thanks for always being there..."LOVE and ROCKET!!"...?
Hello Sweet Rose...
Have you ever considered the flaws as the detail and time that went into it?
Then you have the...
Negative reaction?
Cute write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsongΒ
Hey Sweet Sparrowsong...
Yeah....and still thank God for those flaws...God has a purpose for those too but sometime...you can't help but feel bad about them
Thanks for stopping by and for your words...I appreciate
Lots of love
Hey Rose, this is marvelous. I don't understand why self love is considered Narcissistic, I've heard that too. It's a bit of a paradox when loving who you are makes you most attractive, but considered arrogant sometimes. lol I still cannot figure that out. But you tell it beautifully and with so much passion that I felt myself feeling positive as well. Loving myself by the end of your ink was a treat. :) So thank you. Huggles, Rebecca
Hey Rebecca...I wonder too...you don't get a name for loving others but do for loving yourself.....it beats me when people think I'm arrongant just for appreciating who I am...I'm glad my write makes you feel positive.. That's the motive behind the write.....smiles, love and hugs
What a wonderful and positive beautiful piece from a very, very talented and beautiful girl of whom I am very, very proud indeed. I want to see some more of these type of poems from you because it is the best therapy in the world to write to yourself and be totally honest in that `Letter to Self!` theme! I loved this piece just as much as I love my little Rosebud too.
Love Mum xx
Thanks mum, I'm thrilled to know you're proud of me...I'd try to see if I can write more of this...I'm glad you like it....I love you too mum
Lots of love....your little Rosebud
lol i liked the word play in this one. there is a long standing saying. if you cant love yourself how are you able to love others.Β
cheers jeff
Yaay!!..Thanks Jeff.....you can never love others without first loving yourself...Thanks for your words
Cheers
this is beautiful poetry, Rose, both in content and construction (enjoyed the every second line rhyming) you possess a very elegant and relevant thought steam, friend, tribute...ode to positive self loveΒ Β
Wow!!....you made me blush....Thanks so much Chris....I appreciate your words