Poem - 19 October 2015, 15:37

Me too

Me too

You see the sky as blue

You see the wind as mean.

You see but you don't watch

You hear but you don't listen

You live but you don't feel alive.

And so I cry for you

Because I can see me in you.

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Tony Taylor19 October 2015, 18:32

Hey, my newest friend!!..........this is VERY creative.........love the way you brought the whole thing back around ..........to nail it with the final line...........you have a gift Corky........succinctly compelling.........well done............Love and Rockets!!...........T xo

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Bradford20 October 2015, 18:59

A great write . Cheers to you

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Nardine Sanderson20 October 2015, 19:13

Powerful little piece, loved it well Done
Much love nardine xox.

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