Poem -
Morning
Twas beauty that beheld the morning gaze
Her whispers of a promise in the dawn
To coax with love from light of which she bathed
A soft alluring momentary yawn
Perusing, with her optimistic eye
Her steady hands doth gently lull the land
To shred the night, which occupied the sky
Evoke the sun, who’ll rise to take command
A serenade of sweet melodic sounds
Had splintered through the somber air, she traced
For morning, time itself can know no bounds
As she proceeds to seed the day with grace
First blush, transfixed to bid the night adieu
Content to ever birth each day anew
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Comments
wonderfully written piece Gwen
Thanks so very much, really happy you enjoyed 🙂 x
Awesome poem
Thanks so very much Greg 🙂 x
You’re welcome awesome poem
Thank you Greg 🌸
Very enjoyable read.
Many many thanks John x
Exquisite is a word I dont use much .. but it is probably one of the most applicable words I can think of to pin here write now .......... a truly exquisite poem Gwen ................ Neville :) x
Shucks Neville, such lovely kind words you leave here my friend. Truly grateful of your visit to my little page :) x
You are as always, more than welcome Gwen .. tis but my pleasure entirely :) x
There are several lines in this poem that are gems.. Word usage is superb and
the images just are vivid and entrancing. Good write
RAe
Wow RAe many many thanks for this delightful feedback, such encouraging words to read. Thanks for being so kind and reading my poem
Gwen x
agree with the above, and Neville echoes my sentiment!...........................Jim
Hello Jim, many many thanks for such kind words. I am so sorry for the late reply. My mum and oldest brother decided to come visit. They live abroad and I haven’t seen them for over two years. Hoping life is treating you well my friend and hope to catch up on your poetry soon
your friend
Gwen x
Beautifully crafted in poetic lines. You captured it's true essence there. Pxxx
Hello P :) thanks again for reading my poetry. I am always left beaming when you have dropped by. I hope life is going well my lovely friend x
There are certain echoes, and words and ten syllables per line within your more than well written sonnet Gwen, that even the Great Bard would be proud of to have written.
He would if alive, perhaps salute you with his quill.
Very well done and thensome, a real gemstone and real poetry treat also.
And when you put your mind to something and with pen in hand, it is a real joy to see what arises.
Thank you for writing something original and poetically so.
Great poem. Great writing.
Shaun. x.
Thank you my friend. I have been practicing my sonnet writing of late. Enjoying ensuring the structure is correct. I am so pleased you picked up on my hard work :) Then to compliment my writing by mentioning the Great Bard himself, it can’t get any better really. Thank you tenfold for your kindness and support towards my writing. You are a true treasure on every level when it comes to poetry. Thank you for giving my work your time xx
Gwen, always a pleasure.x.
Love the personification of time~ A very creative read Gwen~
My goodness Max somehow I managed to trip over your comment and not see it. Thank you for stopping by. I hope life is going well for you. So sorry I have been away for months and not long returned when I discovered this little gem on here
Thank you and hope you are still writing x
I think there is much more than the day dawning here! Beautiful words x
Thanks Tina, I love writing about nature. Thank you so much for checking out my page xx