Poem -
Mute
My mouth gets dry
when the topic arises.
Soft as you are,
it would cut me apart
for you to listen to me so bluntly,
While I see it all again.
Silence keeps you awake
but it keeps a solemn distance
From that parasite part of me that
I'd rather bury deep
and set myself on fire.
Worth nothing to put into words, old foreign emotions
It's not even real
Only my eyes.
No one knows,
No one knows.
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Comments
The title got me straight away, great hook. And what a mysterious write. Absolutely fabulous.
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SHALOM
al Bikaadi
Thank you so much, that means alot to me!
Wow CARA!!......that was an intense read/write......I could feel the careful choosing of words and phrasing to keep the whole of it rather enigmatic.....as though you wanted to be revealing......and not be at the same time.....these few lines defined the whole for me ~
~ "From that parasite part of me
that I'd rather bury deep
and set myself on fire..."
A Beautifully delivered piece of poetic prose!!....ALL STARS & PINNED!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
thank you i really did try to keep enigmatic, appreciate this comment so much!
"No one knows" what's going on except you. Well expressed, and do see a lot anger to yourself.
PS 2020-12-31
Wish you a New Year be peaceful and healthy wherever you are.
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Ah thank you, Yiyan Han! I wish you a happy new year too filled with health and happiness! ❤️
A sense of being misunderstood. Such a yerning this feeling brings... what an emotionally filled write.... The cosmos is here for you! Kudos, Peace and smiles too. TFOTS
Emotional indeed! Thank you!!