Poem -

No More Blues for These Tired Eyes

Dear Sir,
I write with regret
to inform you ..
There is a tendency
these days
for my eyes to play
more tricks
on me than usual ..
Regardless
of the time of day
or indeed,
the circumstances ..
It seems
there is a failing light
and I have lost my way ..
Indeed blue,
is well out of reach
and now
denied me altogether ..

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Shaun Cronick

Nice one Nev and for what it inevitably stands for.
Another neat write and this reader enjoys your well crafted and chosen words.
See you later and all good things to you and your family my friend :)

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Neville

Bless you Shaun .. and back at you and yours :)Β 

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Marion

There is a sadness and resignation in this Nev, I just pray there is no physical problem...hugs x

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Neville

My eyes are not what they once were .. I don't mean they are now ears or sumpfink but they are letting me down more and more .. Ever since my first NAAOIN episode and the surgery that followed .. Thanks M :) x

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Marion

Ah I'm sorry Nev...truly x

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Neville

please don't be M .. I have a head full of memories and shall write for as long as I can .. x

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Marion

Well I am sorry Nev...for you and for the blatant unfairness of life...many many hugs ❀

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sparrowsong

Hello Neville...

I hadn't heard of NAAOIN...

​​​​​I'm sorry you're having to deal with this...

​​​​​​I wish you a full and quick recovery...

​​​​​​
​​​​​​Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

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Neville

How very kind my friend .. thank you so much .. NevilleΒ 

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