Nowhere
Nowhere.
Go where?
Nowhere.
Glow where?
Nowhere.
Flow where?
Nowhere.
Show where?
Nowhere.
I will go where?
Nowhere.
I will glow where?
Nowhere.
I will flow where?
Nowhere.
I will show where?
Nowhere.
Nowhere is the place to be,
maybe not for you, but for me.
Comments
There is a strangely effective lonely/depressed feeling evoked by the repetition you've used here.....VERY creative my friend.... and unique in its essence!!.....ALL STARS!!..... well done dear poet brother!!...... LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo 🐧❤
Thanks Tony! Have a nice day!
This is a compelling read and the rhythm and flow leads the reader through the piece at a pace that increases in urgency..very effective and well constructed. An excellent piece of work my friend! Lodigiana xx
Thanks for those kind words! Have a wonderful day!
The repetitive-ness makes it hit home harder...hahaha
What an awesome and truthful write and read!!
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Thank you very much. Kind words like yours are what inspires me. Have a wonderful day!