Poem -
Nowhere
Nowhere.
Go where?
Nowhere.
Glow where?
Nowhere.
Flow where?
Nowhere.
Show where?
Nowhere.
I will go where?
Nowhere.
I will glow where?
Nowhere.
I will flow where?
Nowhere.
I will show where?
Nowhere.
Nowhere is the place to be,
maybe not for you, but for me.
Support CosmoFunnel.com
You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.
Comments
There is a strangely effective lonely/depressed feeling evoked by the repetition you've used here.....VERY creative my friend.... and unique in its essence!!.....ALL STARS!!..... well done dear poet brother!!...... LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo ?❤
Thanks Tony! Have a nice day!
This is a compelling read and the rhythm and flow leads the reader through the piece at a pace that increases in urgency..very effective and well constructed. An excellent piece of work my friend! Lodigiana xx
Thanks for those kind words! Have a wonderful day!
The repetitive-ness makes it hit home harder...hahaha
What an awesome and truthful write and read!!
zZz
Thank you very much. Kind words like yours are what inspires me. Have a wonderful day!