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Old Man

Old Man

We have butted our heads more times than a few
But that doesn't mean that I don't miss, or didn't love you
I know you wanted me to be a good man
And at this point that's exactly what I am
You raised me like a son, and I love you like a father
As time goes on, that feeling gets stronger
I wish I had more time to prove myself to you
I put a little bit of you into everything I do
I hope you knew it all along
I hope you knew it when you passed on
But if not Old Man, I'm telling you now
And hope when you look down on me it makes you proud
Or up from hell just in case
You could be an angel in either place

By LukeCoomer ©

 

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Luke Coomer

I can't believe no likes this it's one of my favorites lol oh well 

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sparrowsong

Hello Luke...

I'm glad you wrote a comment...

I actually missed this one...

Sometimes, we don't always see the Angels in our lives when we have them...

It makes the saying You don't really know what you have until it's gone a true matter of the heart...

My he be looking down from Heaven and continue to have his loving arms around you...

Great tribute!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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Luke Coomer

Thank you sparrowsong

i wasn't sure why it meant so much to me that this one went unnoticed but you took that feeling away I appreciate you

-luke-

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