Old Soul Mistress
Old soul mistress
How I missed her
as she walked away
that fateful day
she took everything
all but me and my last name
Old soul mistress
She hurt me and broke me
left me with a shattered heart
no broken bones
but I'm torn apart
Old soul mistress
I know we had problems
but at least I tried to solve them
admittedly, that's the one thing you didn't see
Baby
you were my everything
but you left me
you left me with hardly anything
I think about you everyday
I dream about you every night
I hate that I'm just standing by
While you get up and leave my life
You hold my heart
you run my mind
Now I can't stop this feeling
That this was just a bad dream
But in the end
I haven't slept a night since you walked away
That hopeless day...
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Dana Lloyd,
Good lyrical form, Love it, My five stars
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you, I wrote this one from the perspective of a broken heart of a man
Wow, very original Dana, fresh sounding title in 'Old soul mistress' that conjures lots of imagery as well, from the perspective of a broken hearted man, you say? Interesting. Tuneful and layered is the line 'She hurt me and broke me' lots and lots of implication here; after all a broken spirit almost never heals. You're very wise and deep as well, talent laden and very detailed in description....it is true what they say; 'you can't teach touch' you possess a certain intangible understanding with words, knowing just how to effectively arrange and maximize their impact, very cool quality....I'm more than impressed by your excellent work....cheer
'Old soul mistress
She hurt me and broke me
left me with a shattered heart
no broken bones
but I'm torn apart'