Poem -
Our (Soul)ar System
And the stars shone
Far beyond
Any eye could see.
Amid the clustered Milky Way
IsĀ where you will find me.
Then eventually
My galaxy
Will collide and ride with yours
As we reunite
The Dark and Light
To ignite our kindred cores.
Carey MiltonĀ Ā 2018
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Comments
This is a wonderfully well written, poetic proclamation portraying pure passion, Carey.
It reads very smoothly out loud.
You've included a great double intendre in your title.
Good rhyming, coupled with an uplifting message filled with hope and love, made this a delight to read.
Exceptional...
~Dean Kuch ~ā„ā¤ļøā„~
Dean thanking you kindly for your in depth analysis of my poem. Much appreciated ?
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My pleasure... :)
Competent piece of intense reflection denoting a longing for appreciation of higher constructs and principles governing the physical and spiritual.
Warm wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
:)
Hey Girlfriend.... where have you been hiding?......I know you're not hiding ?.... but I sure would like to read some of your newest pages to your book..... anyway, I liked this piece for its intensity reflected in the pools that are the revealing nature of writers themselves ......and of course, that which is "Carey Milton's" and "Carey Milton's" alone!!........ stay awesome sister girl!!.......hugs-n-smiles!!.......T xo ???ā“ā¤ā¤ā¤?