Poem -
Overcame
I try to exspess how I feel,
but now I realize those feeling are no longer real.
You're starting to annoy me,
now I feel set free.
Thanks to the poetry you've read,
this love is now dead.
I'm no longer confused,
I'm happy poetry was the proper tool used.
But I still long for you,
yes it's true.
But oh well, it's over now,
and this is how:
we were together,
then we whithered,
I shed a few tears,
but now there's no more fears,
I fought for you,
I stared to loose half way through,
but now I realize the simple truth,
these are only the feelings felt in silly youth.
No more feeling blue,
because now I'm over you.
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Comments
Hey! Liked this very much, love the hopelessness of young romance and unrequited love ( a poetic subject even without your clever use of poetry as a subject). Well done!!
Thanks a lot! I sent my poem "Ethan" to my ex and I got him a little mad since he thinks I'm trying to guilt trip him back into dating me and I got annoyed. So I wrote this as a poetic relief.
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if he were my ex i would have been like "its not a trick to get you to feel guilty, its how i express what im feeling, so it is not my problem if you feel guilty after reading this. im just glad i got to express myself." and i would just end my communication with him there.