Poem -

Passion

author
overthinker
Passion

to be honest, I don't know how I feel about this one. please do let me how it sounds from a readers point of view.

"bodies hugging
showing passion
touching
no words spoken
just an eye contact

showing love
privately
only bodies needing
each other
single touch is perfect"
 

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Erotic Love Passion Passionate
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Passion
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Marion

Hi OT, personally I like the way you have presented this. It is short, simple, too the point. It conveys it's message well...the meeting of two souls through the physical act of love...??

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