Picky eater
(revised)
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A picky eater, through and throughย
Must I force your jaws to chew
Clean the plate with your tongueย
Leave not a single crumbย
Force it down with your thumbย
Thereโs much to learn while youโre youngย
Once youโve been a good childย
and licked every sideย
and your intestines start to squirm
and wiggle like a worm
swallow this pill
and theyยดll go still
better to feel nothing than hurt
now then - who wants dessert?
There there, big kids donโt cryย
It isnโt enough simply to tryย
If you donโt like itย
Pretend toย
I used to be just like youย
And spat out my food, tooย ย
But you have to eat to grow big and strongย
Since when is eating others wrong?
Continue like this and youโll stay a chick
sicken completely and death comes quick
I might forgive you but they will notย
A rotten apple in the potย
Thatโs why I serve you my love hot
Without me, youยดd surely rot
See, kids who are smotheredย
By loving mothers
Are surely but slowlyย
murdered
So give up your talk of sensitivity and mercy
When you get older like me, youยดll see
How everything good and pure shrivels the quickest
How in the end, itยดs survival of the fittest
How in order to eat, one must slaughter
But surely you knew that, my daughter
This world holds no place for pride
Nor children who are nothing but kind
Picky eaters get left behind
So here comes the airplane - open wide!
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Comments
WOW!! WOW!!....this is a STUNNING piece of poetic insightfulness....encompassing so much of this world's negative aspects.....and painting it all into one big lump of societal gruel!!.....some amazing rhyming and phrasing going on here....I can tell you put a LOT of work into this!!......PINNED for perfection!!.....Awesome work SAD GIRL!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xoย : )
Aaah thank you! Iยดm so very happy you like it :) xo
Great write. awesome rhyme, imagery is outstanding
Thank you very much :)