Poem -

A Placid Soul Disturbed

~~I am just a placid soul
 However you just crossed the line

You have shamed me and think nothing of it
I send you a 'pay back' in the smug place you sit

Your revenge is wasted and futile on me
 You will not do harm, your anger so pointless don’t you see

I am just a placid soul
 However you did feel it right to cross the line

You choose to vent such anger upon my road
You have no right, your debt is, without question, not owed

How dare you try and compromise my place
Who the hell are you to cause such trouble in my space

I am a peaceful placid soul
But you pushed and yes, you crossed the line

I will weigh you down, so you see your mistake
I will show you a side that's unpleasant to take

There is little point to your revenge to my placid stance
You will feel me retaliate, my blow like a lance

I am such a placid soul when left undisturbed
Your spite, in its glory, I clearly have heard

Please crawl back from where you came
Stop pointing the finger, you will not succeed in laying your blame

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Christopher Correia

Mercy! Jane I love the  passion in this write....you wrote it like a personal letter and I felt the venom, very interesting to read, fantastic construction, the pull quoted lines below are juicy...cheers

~~How dare you try and compromise my place
 Who the hell are you to cause such trouble in my space

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