Play Pretend

The birds are calling for me,ย
Robin, Blackbird and Wren
Fill the feeders, change the water
For a minute letโs play pretend
Thrown over the back of the sofa
Your t-shirt is where you left it
Socks still stuffed inside your worn trainers
I told you off for being messy
I can lie star-shaped in the bed now
Your leg hair no longer makes me itch
The quilt is all mine
But it smothers me with loneliness
I miss you all the time
The birds are calling for me,ย
Robin, Blackbird and Wren
I need to fill the feeders, change the water
Play pretend

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Wow!! SAMANTHA!!.....this is a VERY compelling piece of poetic prose....conveying the loneliness of a person in love....and feeling the their absence quite profoundly......the imagery created works perfectly and adds to the whole with its effect on the minds eye of the reader!!......ALL STARS!!....well done dear poet sister!!.....and......WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xoย : )
Thank you so much, I'm so glad that you like my poem, it means a lot. ๐โค
Beautiful...hugs ๐
Thank you ๐ย
Thank you so much ๐
Beautiful rhyme and beautiful emotions. ๐น