Poetic Passion
your words
forever
replay in
my mind
overflowing
in my heart
releasing
the ache
I try to keep
caged
how I wish
to taste
the lips
which drip
with poetic
passion
every syllable
which awakens
my depths
and fills my being
with a never ending
craving
to caress
the heart,
lightly with
my feather touches
right across
the imprint of
my name that is
stitched so delicately
right in the center
the heart,
which overflows
with great beauty
all which is so
reflective in your
calmness
and
loving tenderness
the heart,
which captivates me so
to bring
your fingers to
my lips
the very ones in
which I imagine
touching me
in all the places
in which your
words do, daily
to kiss them
one by one
as I look into
your eyes
eyes
which behold
the magic
to look through me
and completely
cause me
to surrender and
fully
let go
of all which
is locked
inside
your presence
your heart
your words
all of which
I hold
forever
deeply within
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An intimate work which so eloquently conveys the feelings and physical nature of love.
Gloriously passionate.
Warmest wishes to you ! :)
Thank you so very much. I appreciate your read and very kind words.
:) Take care.
Hey SOULWHISPERS!!.......you have such a sensual touch in your writing....... not sensuality in its traditional intent or understanding...... I'm speaking to the word choices you make that fill out your phrasing and compels the reader to use the minds eye........ and the formatting here reads with a movement that "Pablo Neruda" chose a part of his life's work ......claiming that it moved words quicker for the reader..... in the case of this poem it works beautifully....... your work is well conceived and delivered...... for me it means that you have a love of the art-form.......THAT makes me more curious about your stuff..........ALL STARS!!......a lovely read........ Well done!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo. ?☀✴✳
Thank you so much for your gracious words. They are so very humbling.
I am very honored by your reference and very thoughtful review.
Much appreciated.