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Poetry Hive

For Shaun Cronick- a Petrarchan sonnet,

Poetry Hive

Harmonious find, inside mutual joy 
Words that drip subtlety: in quiet stead
Whole presence promotes, within poetry bed
"Chronic" pseudonym,  only a decoy.
Precise in virtue, this poetic boy!
"Her cinder path" well trodden, not misread.
"Humanity" kind quality thread
Positivity seeps, comments enjoyed

A voice permeating - media's feeds
Encouraging boosts, pushing all to thrive
Complete in vision - with others foremost
His Festive tribute is in overdrive
Kindred lexicon unites written posts
Friendships established inside poetries hive.

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Shaun Cronick

Oh you little poetic darling!
And a mighty generous one too Lorna!!
I'm lost for words (nearly) but thank you so much for this most munificent pre- Christmas gift.
 A Petrarchan sonnet, the Italian sonnet, is not lost on this contented reader.
Thank you Lorna and I first thought you spelt my surname wrong, but can see where you were going after reading.
Full brownie points to you there!!!!😊
This dark winter has just become much more lighter.
Thank you again Lorna for your kindness and one I will always treasure.
Shaun :) x

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Lorna

Ahh Shaun,
you really made my day the other day, plus I know you are a sonnet fan so I thought I'd have a go at the Italian one!!
I've put your name right in the dedication now...but glad you saw what I did :)
Lorna x
 

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Shaun Cronick

Lorna, it's not about spelling it's about sincerity.👍
Sincerity in spades!!
And I was flagging after work and driving home but after finding this most unexpected gem, my batteries are fully recharged and could punch an elephant!!
I thank you again for what you have so kindly bestowed here.
Shaun xx.
 

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Lorna

Aww...you really are very kind!! 
erm!!  try not to bump into any elephants...as that wouldn't be hahaha
lorna x

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Nine Eleven

A beautiful friendship on a stormy night
Two souls armed with Gods light
The sight of humanity to sing there love
listen all, two turtle doves.
 

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Lorna

Hello Gerard 
thank you, and I love your festive and poetic comment ...hope you are well
kind regards 
Lorna x
 

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Neville

Made each corner of my mouth reach skyward .. this is absolutely stunning the perfect reciprocation and of course, for those of us in the know .. the exquisite and equally cerebral pseudocorruption (my newest neogilism) of a fine poet and friends sirname .. blimey, 2 in a row and all while still jet lagged .. can't be bad in fact it's almost too bloomin good .. wish I could attach more pins to it .. in a nice way of course ..

AGT's and must just add what an honour and a pleasure it is to have you both among my list of good friends .. Neville xx

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Lorna

Ahh Neville... your lovely comment really made my day. , I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
I'm so pleased you had a fabulous time away...and even jet lagged you still popped by...thank you
all the best to you and yours
Your friend 
Lorna 
Xx
 

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Neville

It really was a real pleasure and really all mine my friend xx

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The fish of the sea

Kind words Lorna, although I'm late to the party, I just wanted to add that I really enjoyed your muse with this one ;). Hope you've been well and have an awesome xmas!

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Lorna

Thank you for dropping by, yes I had a good muse for this one
hope you are well
Lorna x
 

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Marion

It fills my soul when people are inspired to write poetry to friends that they've met on here...stunning Lorna...hugs to you and to Shaun x

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Lorna

Thanks Marion, I think we all have the love of words in common so it's so easy to relate to many on here....I hope you are well and all set for the festivities .thank you I'm glad you enjoyed this one 
love lorna xxx

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Jim "The Lad" ....

I've been missing out! great tribute to a great artist!......................................Jim

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Lorna

Hello Jim, 
Very much appreciated 
Thank you so much
lorna xx

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