Poem -
Rainbow
Let my love adorn your heart
Like a rainbow does the sky,
Then let it fill your senses
With a warmth that does not die.
Let my words shine ever bright
Like the moonlight on the sea
And let them never be forgottenΒ
Or tossed aside so easily.
Let us always be right here
In this moment being friends,
Where our love is everlasting
And the rainbow never ends.
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Comments
Beautiful BM ?
Thank you so much Marion x
OMG...just went to comment and then saw I already did...time for bed!!??
I really love this poem.Β
Thank you so much, Melissa. I really appreciate you reading and leaving such a lovely comment x
Great verse really enjoy it
I'm glad you enjoyed this little poem. Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment. I really appreciate it x
Very beautiful BM
Thank you Greg. That's very kind of you to say so.Β Glad you liked it x
great poem
Thank you very much Greg. It's very sweet of you to say so x
Your welcomeΒ
I love rainbows
Thanks for sharing your great write
Rainbows are so beautiful β€?β€
Thank you for reading and for leaving a lovely comment. I'm glad you liked it x
My Dear Being Me,
Such a beautiful composition, about a heart so filled with love.
I give you my poetic response.
Love has many configurations
A true friend so hard to find
But when one feels a never ending connection
There hearts will ever bind
All my love,
Larry xxx
Thank you so much! That's a beautiful poetic response! Glad you liked my poem x
Hi Being Me. A beautiful poem, a joy to read and a very moving piece that stimulates the emotions and that is great writing. Thank you for sharing it.
Thank you so much, Tony, for reading and leaving such a lovely comment. Really appreciated x
Hey Being,Β
Beautiful writing! I so loved that. I'm glad you commented on mine, because I got to read a little piece of beauty here.Β
The only problem is...you got more likes on your one poem than I've had total on 60 poems! It's an outrage! LOL. No, it's not, you deserve it. I write like a 'monkey with a swollen cerebellum' (that was one of my better reviews). Oh well.Β
Beautiful writing. Can't wait to read more.Β
Matthew.Β
Hi Matthew...I read your poem because it was so beautiful and I thank you for taking the time to pop over and read this one that I did. Thank you so much for leaving a lovely comment that also made me smile. (A monkey with a swollen cerebellum ?Β ...I know that is not true cos I just read your lovely poem). Thanks again my friend x
You're so welcome, Being Me...wait, are you being me? Because that might be quite detrimental to your poetry. Hopefully, you're being you, and not me???? You are really nice. I love meeting nice people on here who aren't afraid to make friends, and have fun. I'm glad I met you. I'll read your others when I'm not so busy at work.Β
Have a great day, and keep writing beautiful poetry.Β
Matthew.Β
And keep in touch! Please. M.Β
I love the way you ended your write , rockΒ
Thankyou, Rock! I really appreciate that x
Such a pretty and delicate poem on loveΒ
Hi Gwendoline, thank you so much for reading and commenting. I appreciate that and I am glad you liked the poem x
A ultimately warm creation, words like moonlight on the sea, love adorning like a rainbow...let us always be here, where the love is everlasting...very beautiful...
Hi Dan, thank you so very much for reading the poem. It's a beautiful comment you have written here and I am grateful to you. I am happy to know that you liked this little poem on love and friendship. Thanks again x
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? thank you x
I just love this it's so cute, dreamy and magical ?Β there is just something about rainbows that we have to stop and look at. Excellent piece Px ?
Hi P, thank you so much for reading!Β Rainbows, are just sooo beautiful ?.Β Β Β I really appreciate your support and I am so very sorry for my late reply.Β Thank you ? x
You're welcome :) xxx
Tina you had me with the word rainbow let alone you beautiful and uplifting poem that doesn't just sparkle but gloriously shines and so brightly.
A real feel good inspiring well written write and poetry kudos to you for doing so and your imagination knows no bounds from what I've read so far, for your themes are so original and eclectic and beautiful to read.
Thanks Tina ,I wish you well and enjoy life and poetry and the good things that each can bestow and share.
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Hi Shaun, my god how did IΒ miss your beautiful comment here?Β I noticed I missed a few so am trawling through incase there are any more that I've missed and I have just seen this...I am so very sorry for my later than late reply. Thank you soooo much for visiting and reading, I cannot tell you how honoured I feel. I am blessed to call you my friend x
It aint hard to see (and feel) just how good and deservedly popular the little gem you pasted here truly is ... I grew tired simply trying to scroll down to this precise point .................It is after all, quite simply beautiful BM .. N :) x
Awww Thankyou Neville x
You are most magnificently welcome BM x
I just came back for seconds.. for no other reason than I wanted to and there aint nowt than can stop me ... x
Awwww....thank you so much xx