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Regret

Acrostic

Regret

Rumours surface 
Eventually purges 
Glitter turns to dust
Rubble forms round trust
Escape you cannot find
This niggles on your mind 

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The fish of the sea

Amazing. Simply beautifully creative as Rob said yet so very true. Rumours can destroy and change everything... Yet they don't define who we are. Hope you are ok Gwen! Cosmos is here to support.

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Gwendoline

Hello Max, thank you ever so much for your thoughtful comment and support. Indeed what people say can plant seeds of thought about another. Bringing much pain. It is sad but sometimes people don’t understand the power behind words, not until it’s too late. So glad you enjoyed this piece today 😊🌻

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Gwendoline

Thanks so much linda, so glad you liked it 😊🌻

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Marion

Truth....words can be beautiful and uplift or be ugly and destroy. So much power in words x

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Gwendoline

Hello Marion, thank you for reading. They certainly are a powerful thing. Uplifting someone is always nicer than bringing them down. Sadly some prefer the later 

So glad you liked this piece 🌻😊 x
 

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Shelley-anne St...

Really creative, great rhymes again. Excellent poem again, wow thank you so much for sharing your mind and beautiful light with us ☀

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Gwendoline

Awe Shelley-anne thank you again for reading my work. Am afraid some of it is rather bleak and morbid. Thank you for the beautiful feedback. I am going to read some of you. Your comments alone intrigue my mind to read your work 😊🌻✨

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Shaun Cronick

Gwen that's life it can be cruel and it can be kind a real mixed bag for one and all.
For at the end of of the day it's all about learning and to achieve wisdom of  sorts.
To err, in whatever is thrown at us through out life and its many twisting and turning roads is to be simply human and learn and hopefully move on from with better eyes and understanding and not to repeat.
Loved it, for being so pure and direct.
Thanks Gwen and you can take any theme and weave something that simply shines.
 

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