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Release

I feel drained with no words left to explain....

Can anyone feel my pain?

Does anyone feel the same?

I'm done showing my love and giving my all just for my heart to be played.

I'm feeling alone with no one to hold.

 Where do I go when every door is close.

I can't seem to focus when my emotions are taking a toll.

The world I live in is hidden deep in my soul.

I feel like I'm losing control.

Like my brain is ready to explode with all the lies I've been told.

I'm done trying to pretend.

 Before this all comes to a end I promise to release it all and never deal with any of this ever again!

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Dean Kuch

Do what I did, Elliot.
Get yourself a dog.
Hey, dogs make grrrrrrrrrrreat companions.
They don't ask for much, just your time and attention.
They don't talk back and they listen if you have to scold them...eventually.
The best dogs to have around are mutts as pure bred dogs tend to be a bit high strung, not to mention expensive.
Just go to your local dog pound, pick one out (you'll also be sparing its life), and you got a life-long friend.
Problem solved. 
~Dean ??

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Elliot Garcia

Thanks Dean...I'm really ok..Just like getting deep in my writing so people can either relate or feel what I'm writing. I love to share n see what kind of responses I receive...thanks for the advice
..already have a dog.
.thinking of getting another animal..

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Nine Eleven

I find music is a great escape, there is a wonderful song called Dust and Ashes by Josh Groban, listen to the lyrics, its a very powerful song. Take it easy. 

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Elliot Garcia

Thanks Gerard...I'm ok really...not everything I write is smthing that I'm dealing with...I just like to express 
myself n get deep into the core of what I'm writing about. Thanks for the concern n advice!

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