“The Replacements”

“The Replacements”
There’s nothing like, that of the original, first of its kind,
Holds, number #1 place in line.
Proto-type, for the crowd they seek, perfection to be sought,
All flaws found, to be tweaked.
You’re the pride and joy, with no question to be asked,
You’re the seal of approval, the perfect toy.
Yet there is a new kid on the block, known to be new and improved,
claiming to replace your shoes and sock.
What adventures has he in store, when confronted with the entrance,
he intends to open, has a steel door.
What audience has he to entrust, he’s gone and latched on to the notion,
of achieving it, are bust.
With a little time in hand, nothing comes easy, his task and goal,
is to prove it to next man.
Support not to be known, strikes to he, all relevant, when placed at bat,
He’s forced, to bring it all home.
Some seem to say, your image stands alone, with the original nowhere in sight,
the joy to, is all gone.
What big shoes, have you to fill, it won’t come that easy, to attempt to,
close, the raw deal.
For the glory that you seek, will surely be their pain, what length will you have reached,
to achieve this golden gain.
Though on the other hand, what price would it have cost, to have entered this rat race
and apparently had lost.
Just as all things in life, these are the chances you will take, when you attempt to fix,
that which has no break.
*The morrow to this story is, sometimes the new, becomes the (discarded) new old,
(Faster), than the original, which is now, (accepted) as the brand new.
Jim
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Extremely thought provoking verse from the Golden Pen of Sir Jim Arnold Sir ( Brother)
My vote, My nomination
Regards, Hugs
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you brother Williamsji as always, you are a gentleman and a scholar...
Jim
Once again your poem got me thinking! I agree with Cherie when she said this is a very creative write! Congratulations on your well deserved nomination!
Love Always,
Val <3
You are an intelligent writer,poet and probably speaker too.This one caught me right in.And true replacements won't last long always original is gold.My applause to your deep thoughts.
Cheers
Piusha
"Miss Lady"
You are to kind and in fact it is you that have turned a lot of heads with your "break out" talent.Your talent is like a runaway train and there is no stopping you and what you can do..I love the attached lines: And true replacements won't last long always original is gold. (Ever so true)..
Thank you Piusha,
Jim