Ripped apart.

Ever had ย something tear your whole family apart ?
ย I have and it was terrible to watch,
ย sometimes youโre ย lucky and they might stay,
Other times you might want to run away,
How can it be that important you might say?
well itโs not I hope you realize that one day, ย
you took everything from me not knowingly,
Even though the drugs are illegal,
you crushed them up and shot them up as much as you can,
ย itโs sad when you find needles in your drawers ,
but even sadder when you walk out those doorsย
ย I try to tell myself the past is the past,
ย but I know Iโm lying and yet I try to make it last,
I tell you I love you as much as I can,
because I never know when I can hear your voice again,
As I read your letters I have to thank you,
you made my life harder,
but yet Iโm stronger,
thank you for my aunts,sisters,and my father
ย
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Please let me know what you think. Honest opinions
I really like this heartfelt poem Kristen, it is an issue close to my heart and you have expressed the anguish and damage perfectly xx
Thank you!! All my poems are close to my heart. Means a lot and Iโve never really shared anything like this so thanks again for the support
Yes mine are also..iv written a few also on addiction and the terrible effects on family members xx
This is raw, powerful poetry, Kristen.
It must have been gut-wrenching to dredge up those poisonous, woebegone feelings and put pen to paper (or fingers to a keyboard, as the case were).
But sometimes writing these things down in some tangible form--a form like poetry, for example--where they can be revisited over and over again is like a purging of the soul.
It helps to get 'em outta your head.
~?โฅโค๏ธDean Kuchโค๏ธโฅ?~
Thank you so much. I feel as if poetry is my way of venting.ย
I feel the same way.
You're more than welcome, Kristen.
~Dean Kuch
Warmest welcome to the cosmos. Great first post. Even though this is such a somber write, it is very well written
Excellent write, enjoyed.
Thank you!!!
really loved this!! sounds really emotional, but thats what makes a good poem! just loved it. well done!
I appreciate that. Thanks for the support and giving me the courage to carry on writingย