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Rogue Hero Knight

Rogue Hero Knight

The lights flashed in twinkling harmony,
making even the stars pale in comparison.
The moon would have been yellow and papery
were it not for the silvery strikes upon the bell
which rang with wonderful notes and lustre.

Glinting steel upon cold steel of blades,
Fighting in the frosty winter night,
glinting and glinting and
killing and slaying with
honour and glory that no other possessed
fighting off any offenders with just a glance
a tragic smile on its possessor,
while silver rained rightfully.

Yet he smiled a ghost of a smile
which lit upon his face,
transforming him beyond.

Insane angelicness,
Angelic demons.
He would be feared and loved
Yet alive he was evermore.

 

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Ella

really like this!! well done

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Tony Taylor

Very compelling poetic prose here sir......... with some gorgeous imagery painted beautifully!!.......ALL STARS!!..... well done...... and.......WELCOME to COSMO!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo 👍✴👌⭐🐧😊

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

HI Mitsali....What great imagery with your descriptive words to paint a picture of this rogue-hero knight.  You portrayed a great narrative in prose and formatting.....Welcome to Cosmo...I will be reading your work.  xo ;)

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Mitsali Fatima

It's always really good to get complimented thank you!
I hope you'll continue to read compliment and advise my work :)

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Dean Kuch

A powerful and intriguing write, Mitsali Fatima.
You're either an avid gamer, or the Game of Thrones upcoming season premiere has you all jacked up, LOL.
Excellent...
⚔️~🕱Dean Kuch~🕱⚔️

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Mitsali Fatima

Thank you sir !
Neither of those though,
My love of reading any and every fairytale or fantasy novel out there is probably to blame :D 

 

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Dean Kuch

Game of Thrones was a series of fantasy novels long before it became an HBO series, Mitsali.
They are authored by George R. R. Martin.
And, as with all books, they too are much better than the cinematic version.
You're welcome.
Take care, and happy writing!
~Dean

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Mitsali Fatima

I should know better than to judge a book by the tv series,
I'll definitely give it a read !

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Silent Dreamer

Wow, this is a beautiful write! Very well done, I loved it😍

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Dmitri Rudder

Its funny. after reading this, I wonder... 
Why do you ask me how I do it? I'm just lucky to have stumbled along from my first ill considered poem. While you have a very promising beginning as a poet and a writer of many masterpieces to come.

I hope to everything that you'll continue to grace us with your poignant and insightful poems. I wish you nothing but the best.

-Love and Best Wishes, Dmitri

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Mitsali Fatima

You flatter me really Dmitri,
I thank you for your kind and frankly inspiring words.
I'll try my best to improve and go beyond!   :)

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Simon Bromley

You paint a very vivid picture of colour, power, sadness.  I loved it.  Great flow and very enjoyable to read.  Well done.

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Mitsali Fatima

Thank you! This poem was a bit of a throw in the dark, hit and run you know I appreciate that you complimented it. 

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Jack Ellison

Absolutely BRILLIANT, Mitsali... intriguing write! Love, Happy Jack XOX
 

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Crystal Doyle

Crazy poetry right here!!! It's really cool 
Thanks for liking my poem as well

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Mitsali Fatima

Awe thank you crystal! 
I'll definitely read your work so keep writing  :)

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Crystal Doyle

oh haha my work probably wont be as good as all you guys' writes 

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Mitsali Fatima

You should be optimistic! I think your poem is good for a first poem you know :)

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Cleo Tomi Olajide

Great write Fatima, enjoyed the pictures you painted With this poem. welcome to cosmofunnel. warm regards. 

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Mitsali Fatima

Thanks so much, Mister Cleo
I'm glad you liked it :)

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Sammar Fatima

Is that the one you made up on the spot by accident?

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Mitsali Fatima

I'm sure I don't know what you're talking about :)

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Sammar Fatima

It is the one you plucked out of thin air I know it...

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Mitsali Fatima

I'm surprised that it got so popular to be honest, but hey you can do it too I'm rooting for you.

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Sammar Fatima

Just because I have one poem out no need to rub it in

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