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Shedding Some Light!

Shedding Some Light!

Poetry is about connecting
reach an touch the soul cos thats what there expecting

sometimes i freestyle sometimes theres meaning
i write about anything that my mind is recieveing

but when i come up with something really deep
i make sure i capture & connect with the words i speak

ill pick someone up if there on the floor in an heap
whisper some words of strength if there feeling weak

wipe tears away from there cheek an tell them stay strong
an if i suddenly disappear tell them i wont be away long

and even then ive got my pen & pad keeping in touch 
Ive got much love for them cos deep inside theyve got my trust

Ive not come to the site to cause a fuss or upset others
I treat everyone like there my real blood sisters & brothers

after all this site is a learning curve were we can serve
share our work to everyone from all four corners of the earth

 

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sparrowsong

Hello James...

I have been with Cosmo over 3 Years and I appreciate everyone who takes their time to Read...

If I could touch one heart and put a smile on someone, to me that's worth so much...

I don't need to receive a repetitious comment, I try to help people and if I receive a comment that is negative or sarcastic, I don't say anything other than thanks because, I know the people who do return to me because, I do keep to my mission and I'm not rude in return...

I'm not interested in creepy old perverted men, I'm not a Lesbian and I'm not trying to turn anybody on...

People say many times I'm unique and not like anyone else, and I like that...

Be true to you!

Thank you for sharing!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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James unsworth

?????? i understand sparrow i feel what your saying, thanks for the feedback ??

thanks l.barto ??

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James unsworth

No hard feelings dplank were all here to learn i call my self a beginner no were near professional otherwise i wouldnt be on this site still learning ??

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James unsworth

Saya thank you and god bless you ?

real recognize real - 2pac

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sparrowsong

Hello James...

I would just like to add if I may?

If I had to write for a living, I think I would lose the Joy because of the pressure...

It would be a job to me, if a Publisher picked it up, now what?

Deadlines, what they want and try and change me...

It wouldn't be a successful endeavour for me, if I didn't have my heart in it...

If they said listen, I think you would be a good fit for our Team I would give a try...

Again, not for Fame but, to be a part of something great, a new experience, and a new adventure...

Thank you again

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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James unsworth

not for Fame but, to be a part of something great, a new experience, and a new adventure.
^^^^^
i seriously agree with you sparrow, its pressure just coming on here never mind being picked by a publisher, maybe self employed would be a good option haha 

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sparrowsong

If here's pressure, then something is definitely wrong...

Read the Mission Statement...

Then someone isn't standing by what it's meant to be...

No one should feel like that...

It's fine to turn your back on the Devil right?

Isn't that the importance of saying Satan get thee behind me?

Just keep doing what you're doing...

If people stop reading you, write it anyway...

What have you got to lose?

We should write with ourselves in mind as if no one is reading...

People say write as if your Mother won't read it...

That's actually easy, my Mother was very much into Horror...

 

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