Should she be punished.
Should she be punished for moral growth or ground.
Should she be on trial for the tribulations she encountered.
Should she be made an example of, as she spoke a whole nother language.
Should it be a patch, repair for the things on her broken plate.
Punishment from the fine print didn't realize you can sign away your life.
Since when can you take on the unchewable hard stuff.
There's a pun in punishment somewhere.
The establishment is everywhere.
Inside her growth coffin aspiring outer perspective that self punished.
And believed that that was punishment enough.
After all fingers have different names, digit or thumb, index, bird, wedding on one hand only and pinky, there all nicknames for fingers.
Same concept should apply to Humans.
People.
Race.
Creed.
Mammals.
Air breathers.
She disagreed with vengeance.
She wanted to stand.
Her doubt debated if the corner can be talked out off.
Or what a stupid thing that would be to do, talk to a corner who's listening there.
Punishment because sometimes she just didn't know what to do.
Not fair I tell you.
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Fantastic poem Liliana. You inspire me with your word play as always. A clever mind you have~
I hope I'm cleaver enough to reach the fallen.
'There's a pun in punishment
somewhere.'
Agree with Max...great write x
Thank you.
"Not fair I tell you."......I have to say this ~ having grown up in a family torn apart by their respective opinions about the nature of prejudice....I have to say I REALLY like the "Middle of the road" tract that you took here...in this most controversial and "Lay your cards on the table" kinda revelation LILIANA!!.....a VERY powerful and compelling jump forward !!.....ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!......well done dear poet sister!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
PS. My mother is white...my father was black & Cherokee Indian......so these kinds of conflagrations were commonplace for me......Well done!!
Thank you for noticing that middle of the road approach .
Glad I have made a jump forward, thank you for noticing that too.
I hope your life is full of love now.
really cool write Liliana! I believe ultimately our punishment will be to ourselves realizing how much more we could have had, just some regret. .................................................................................Jim
Yeah