Silent Sentinels: a blank verse

Antediluvian stones bare the names
of those who have gone on so long before.
Across deathโs threshold, thinned veils open wide;
a bone-faced porter waits with bated breath.
For Death has come to take me far from here,
to walk on mystic shores steeped moist with mist.
My debts are paid, I am prepared to die
just as naked as the day I was born.
Tall trees, like skeletons, stripped bare and bleak
stand silent sentinel oโer top the place
where I, once mortal, rest my weary bonesโ
a timeless bed cloaked coyly in clover.
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No daunting, golden light doth comfort me,
for here I stand in deepest darkness now.
This aching bitterness I feel inside
is lost on silent winds of dire despair.
Should I dare wonder how things might have been
had life dealt me a royal flush instead?
Alas, true love was never in the cards,
as Iโve been doomed to die alone, just I.
Yet, farther beyond moonlight's ghostly void
there lies in wait a diffโrent shade of grey,
where stormy clouds have gathered in a haze.
As twilightโs velvet cloak envelops me...
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The word has more than one meaning, Merrill. For example see below (source: dictionary.com)
anยทteยทdiยทluยทviยทanย [an(t)ฤdษหloอovฤษn/]
adjective
1. of or belonging to the time before the biblical Flood.
"gigantic bones of antediluvian animals"
synonyms:out of date, outdated, outmoded, old-fashioned, antiquated, behind the times, passรฉ
"her antediluvian attitudes"
humorous
2. ridiculously old-fashioned.
"they maintain antediluvian sex-role stereotypes"
synonyms: out of date, outdated, outmoded, old-fashioned, antiquated, behind the times, passรฉ
Origin
mid 17th century: from ante- + Latin diluvium โdelugeโ + -an.
Thanks very much for reading, my friend.
~Dean
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Awesome poem on behalf of a dead man, creatively described n expressed. ESP admire the clover bed line and the last line all so poetic. Kudos.
so hi I am a newbie , would u Pleez review/comment my latest poem too, I like having poetic interaction to know thoughts.
Thank you very much for reading & reviewing my work, S.zaynab.kamoonpury.
I appreciate your input.
As a relative "newbie" to Cosmo myself I know all too well how difficult it is to try to build a fan base. That being said, I'd be more than happy to take a peek at your portfolio.
Take care, and thanks again.
~Dean Kuch
Friend base for poetic conversation would do for me. So we are in the same newbie boat eh, oh u were in the military, glad u r not too army base scary.
best wishes.
Best wishes to you as well.ย :)