Slowly...

Slowly,
gently,
patiently,
peel back this skin,
this flesh,
these veins,
that pulse with silence.
Break each bone that harbours
the sorrow of all my yesterdays;
each bone that is drenched in
the oceans tears.
Reduce me down to,
before I
was me,
to before my eyes beheld your soul.
Let me live a hundred years more,
as a bird,
a sweet bird,
with a candy voice
that sings its eternal song; and
flies so high, it may kiss the sky..
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Comments
Just wonderful
John
Thank you so much, John! xx
Awesome! I'm cursed with the curse of being unable to write free verse, everything has to rhyme or be in time.
This is how it's done though.
A wish to born again...Beautifully written
Take careΒ - SydΒ
Syd, thank you so much for your amazing comment!
I do also write in rhyme too, but mainly in free verse, as I love the freedom of it!
xx
Wonderful phrasiology and imagery! love thisΒ
Thank you so much, Iodigiana, very kind xx
Thank you so much, Iodigiana, very kind xx
outstanding imagery. Bravo!
Thank you so kindly, Poetessdarkly! I appreciate you reading it! xx