Small Change
Once shiny brass Passed from hand to hand
Worth little, yet still has some use
Silver, more value, for those who need
Where gold wanted, cost rich no doubt
All of it tarnished in the palms of inhumane hunger
Strewn aside forgotten, like discoloured brass
Merit in large numbers, ample bronze found
Many similar, not seen to stand alone
Passed from hand to hand Leaving simply dull, without lustre
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NICE ONE. :)
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Thanks Richard it was in the shape of a coin but cant seem to master it in here x
Hey LORNA!!.....I can see what you were attempting here with your formatting.......regardless, your point is well made.... like the "Circle Of Life" you follow the 'Small Change' from ~ "Once shiny brass.." to "Leaving simply dull, without luster"......VERY well conceived and delivered dear poet sister!!...... It's so cool to see you on the pages again!!...... Sending Lots of Love to you and yours!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo ?❤
Ahhh Tony, thanks for commenting I'm happy to be here!!.. glad you enjoyed this ..starting shiny and new...tarnished over time till all lustures lost...yes that's exactly what I was saying ...thanks for reading xx
a lot of brilliance in simplicity. Love it
Thanks Greg
:)
great poem
Thanks Greg x
Hi Lorna,
Love to have you back.
I enjoyed reading despite the formatting, but I understand.
Nicely done!
love Leah
Thanks leah, yes the formatting didnt quite do what I wanted, thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it
Love Lorna xx
Lorna so good to see your posts again
Hi lisa
thanks ...im glad to be here
lorna xx
Our Dear Lorna,
How wonderful to be in touch with you and Jason again. Linda's Birthday is tomorrow, and we can't think of a nicer gift that she could have received.
I will respond to your powerful words with a Haiku. (Just like old times, huh)
The brass have their gold
The poor-their pennies for life
Tarnished Angels
All our love,
Linda and Larry xxx
Thank you so much Larry
Love lorna xx