Poem - 24 January 2017, 10:43

Spectrum

Lorna

This box is not the greatest fitting

Let’s find a box for you to sit in!

We’ll wait a while, to check its right,

Care not for your, emotional plight

Shall be the ones, to bring out fraction,

You do not fit! This needs MORE action.

When might we find, your proper label?

Perhaps, you’ll then be called stable.

Away from all, out of the midden,

It’s OK, as long as your hidden.

A little place for you to stay,

Not disturbing, normal play.

Find only friends, who are just like you,

Creating wedges, society through.

Why must we create this huge divider?

Maybe, just open the box a little wider.

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Comments

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐24 January 2017, 11:25

such a lovely pen Lorna!

XX Lisa

Lorna24 January 2017, 11:46

Thanks you ?

Jason Brown24 January 2017, 11:46

The surest way to corrupt a youth is to instruct him to hold in higher esteem those who think alike than those who think differently.

That was how Nietzsche put it. Personally, I prefer your way; much sweeter, more poetic and significantly more inventive.

Lovely!

J xxx

Lorna24 January 2017, 11:48

Thank you ?

Tony Taylor24 January 2017, 12:10

Hey L. CAIZLEY!!......interesting piece!!..... compelling poetic prose!!!.......ALL STARS!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!!........T xo. ?✳✴☀

Tony Taylor24 January 2017, 12:11

Ps....... poetic verse.,.,,.sorry ?

Lorna24 January 2017, 12:12

Thanks Tony ?

The Bee24 January 2017, 12:51

Getting to know those who are different from us, who knows, their life could be more interesting. Enjoyed reading this one L, thanks for sharing your thoughts :-)

Lorna24 January 2017, 13:23

Thanks Bee x

Richard Waters24 January 2017, 13:01

Wonderful incisive intuitive work.

Thanks for sharing !

Warmest wishes. :)

Lorna24 January 2017, 13:23

Thank you ?

Richard Waters25 January 2017, 12:15

Lorna26 January 2017, 09:56

thank you all, I truly appreciate all of your comments, you are all so kind :)

Jason Brown01 February 2017, 15:49

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Lorna01 February 2017, 16:17

:) thanks x

Deborah Evans01 February 2017, 16:03

Hi Lorna Great poem
Congratulations on your win
Best wishes Debs x

Lorna01 February 2017, 16:18

Thank you Debs :)

Leah Yodico01 February 2017, 17:36

Very poetic!!! and inspiring

Lorna01 February 2017, 17:39

very much appreciated, thanks xx

Jacki Goebel01 February 2017, 18:46

Hi Lorna! Loved your poem!*!*! Congrats on the win... Yes, sometimes our perspectives are far too narrow. :)

Lorna02 February 2017, 01:23

Thank you ?

Cleo Tomi Olajide01 February 2017, 21:55

Hi Caizley, Great write. Congrats. Warm regards. Cheers.

Lorna02 February 2017, 01:24

Thanks ?

Bryan Delorme02 February 2017, 04:57

great piece of work! it is like everywhere I go people attract like minded people. you get what you put in and it's all about perception... for me personally I am an outsider and I like it this way. If people are stupid I'm silent, if people have an open heart and an open mind I feel more free to speak me mind.

From

Mastermind

Lorna02 February 2017, 05:11

Thanks Brian, I'm glad you liked it, Silence is a useful tool, as one persons Idea of stupidity could also be another's Idea of brilliance.

You're right, it is about perception :)

Wendy Wass02 February 2017, 10:58

Great poem. Well done x

Lorna02 February 2017, 11:06

Thank you ?

sparrowsong02 February 2017, 13:58

Hello L Caizley...

Congratulations on your win!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

Lorna02 February 2017, 15:08

Thanks ?

The Bee02 February 2017, 15:21

Hey L, a very deserving win, my highest congratulations to you. Well done xox :-)

Lorna02 February 2017, 16:23

Thank you Bee x

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐02 February 2017, 15:25

Congrats Lorna

Lorna02 February 2017, 16:24

Thanks x

Devon La Porte04 February 2017, 21:09

Hello L Caizley. Wonderful write. The picture really drew me in and congratulations on the contest win. Peace.

Lorna05 February 2017, 11:06

thank you so much, I really appreciate your comments

Leah Yodico12 February 2017, 05:22

Sorry for being a late comer!

Huge congratulations!!! A brilliant piece of verse.

GREG TUCKER THE...18 October 2017, 20:30

oustanding

Lorna19 October 2017, 09:24

Hi Gregory, You seem to be working your way through my poetry :D .....Thank you so much for your lovely comments. I was really proud of this one
Lorna xx