Poem -
Staged Lives
Does it really matter?
Picture of perfection!
Narcissisms largest platter
Images which breed rejection.
Overwhelming need to disengage
Good are the so called deeds
Just for life's ambiguous stage,
Bring forth the live feeds!
Causing reasoned shame
In envy's first little bite
looking for unknown blame
Falling from immense height
Bloodlusting greed
In hopes of a ‘like’
Hell falls with speed
You're Nailed to a spike.
Stain now varnished
headfirst you now go
Forever tarnished
Bring on the next blow.
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Comments
Funny, wry and tightly written.
You make your point with a tiny bit of acid on the blade...as evidenced by the above-quoted lines.
I love it...and you.
your Jason XxXxXxXx
thanks sweetheart, I'm so glad you liked it...they were actually my favorite lines too
All my Love
Your Lorna
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Hello Lorna...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hi Sparrowsong
Thank you so much for your kind words, I really appreciate them
Lorna
xxxx
Hey CAIZLEY!! (smiles).....way to strike at the heart of the social media frenzy!!....Love it!!.....and I find it VERY interesting that you chose that twisting of surrealism's finest representative EVER!!.....the clocks that Dali did were and still are amazing.....and like social media participants, are so often misunderstood and mistreated !!......PINNED this!!.....love the intent dear poet sister!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?✳✴☀
Hi Tony, Hahah...Yes I felt it apt at the minute..... As you know I absolutely love Dali, and this image really felt fitting as it kind of represented (to me) the way in which social media can change something beautiful for its own self promotion....Yet Dali himself sold out on many occasions to I thought he wouldn't mind too much hahaha
thank you for your comment I am glad you enjoyed this one
Lorna
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"All the world's a stage, And all the men and women merely players..." An apt write in today's climate. Well done.
Thank you so much Lost, glad you enjoyed this one.
Lorna
:)
Again extreme imagery! So fantastic about the "like" comment
Thanks Again Gregory, I'm so glad you "like" my writing, I'm enjoying yours too :D
Kind regards
Lorna :D