Steps

You're here, you're done
---------------------------------- the final step,
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Its too high,
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you might fall,
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You can't do it,
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It's too late,
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the hardest part
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The rockiest bottom ( it's where to start)
inspired by a quote from Samuel Beckett -
Try again, fail again, fail better
Climbing up is difficult, falling down is easy, but it hurts, that hurt can stop you from even trying
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Incredible structure to this beautifully creative interpretation of a quote !
You try to stretch the boundaries of poetry to produce original dynamics in your formulations.Your work is thus enterprising and inventive enhancing its appeal !!
Tidy piece !
The warmest of wishes. Take care. xx
:)
Hi Richard, thank you so much for your comment, I enjoy experimenting with words so I'm glad you liked this one
Lorna xx
:) Immensely enjoy reading your poetry as it is always either thought-provoking, emotion instilling or visionary, with the work sometimes being a combination of these elements !! Your work is never dull or predictable !!
Long may you continue to write.
Warm wishes and hugs !! XX
Wow, thank you so much. Richard your poetry is often filled with such positivity and optimism as are your comments, I truly appreciate it.
Lorna
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:) Thank you for sharing your poetry !!
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I love the formatting here Lorna, ### There are little things that can take us to the highest peak,but enough to get us off the cliff # and when we are on the ground, we seem to lose courage, we don't get up##
Xoxo
Leah
Thanks Leah, sorry about the late reply, I've bee away..I really appreciate you comments, and so glad you liked the formatting
Lorna xXx
Wow!!...The formatting makes it feel as one is climbing a step while reading...A very motivational piece Lorna...Enjoyed
Hi rose, glad you enjoyed this one, and sorry for the delayed reply.
Thank you so much for your comments
Lorna xXx
Clever, inventive, inspiring and somewhat mind-bending. The great thing about this poem is the formatting and how that leaves it open to the reader whether to read upwards or downwards; rendering the whole thing a poetic palindrome...brilliant!!!
{Sorry it took so long for me to read this...I've been busy offline, as well you know!!}
Love always,
J XxXxXxXxXxXxXx
Welcome back Jason the world missed you
thanks sweetheart, i'm so glad you enjoyed it and happy to have you back on here xxxx
Diffrent you here....but cool....all yours
Thank you ?