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Steps

Steps

                                                                                                 You're here, you're done

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    ----------------------------------                                                                                                           the final step, 

                                                                                ----------------------

                                                                          Its too high, 

                                                                -------------------------

                                                           you might fall,

                                                 -----------------------------

                                           You can't do it, 

                                   ------------------------------

                                   It's too late,  

                            ---------------------------

                     the hardest part

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The rockiest bottom ( it's where to start)

 inspired by a quote from Samuel Beckett -

Try again, fail again, fail better

Climbing up is difficult, falling down is easy, but it hurts, that hurt can stop you from even trying

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Richard Waters

Incredible structure to this beautifully creative interpretation of a quote !

You try to stretch the boundaries of poetry to produce original dynamics in your formulations.Your work is thus enterprising and inventive enhancing its appeal !!

Tidy piece !

The warmest of wishes.  Take care.  xx

:)

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Lorna

Hi Richard, thank you so much for your comment, I enjoy experimenting with words so I'm glad you liked this one

Lorna xx

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Richard Waters

:) Immensely enjoy reading your poetry as it is always either thought-provoking, emotion instilling or visionary, with the work sometimes being a combination of these elements !! Your work is never dull or predictable !!

Long may you continue to write.

Warm wishes and hugs !!  XX

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Lorna

Wow, thank you so much. Richard your poetry is often filled with such positivity and optimism as are your comments, I truly appreciate it.

Lorna 

xXx

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Leah Yodico

I love the formatting here Lorna,  ### There are little things that can take us to the highest peak,but enough to get us off the cliff # and when we are on the ground, we seem to lose courage, we don't get up##

Xoxo 

Leah 

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Lorna

Thanks Leah, sorry about the late reply, I've bee away..I really appreciate you comments, and so glad you liked the formatting 

Lorna xXx

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Rose Sho

Wow!!...The formatting makes it feel as one is climbing a step while reading...A very motivational piece Lorna...Enjoyed

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Lorna

Hi rose, glad you enjoyed this one, and sorry for the delayed reply.

Thank you so much for your comments

Lorna xXx

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Jason Brown

Clever, inventive, inspiring and somewhat mind-bending. The great thing about this poem is the formatting and how that leaves it open to the reader whether to read upwards or downwards; rendering the whole thing a poetic palindrome...brilliant!!!

{Sorry it took so long for me to read this...I've been busy offline, as well you know!!}

Love always,

J XxXxXxXxXxXxXx

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Lorna

thanks sweetheart, i'm so glad you enjoyed it and happy to have you back on here xxxx

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