Poem -
Stilted Pathway!
By the blue lagoon waters
a stilted pathway is spied
meandering in its way
like a stumbling drunkard
on his journey home
across this serene bay
In these turquoise waters
each wooden post sunk deep
holding firm against the tide
and steadfast in its path
damp under our feet
drawing us to the far side.
Seeing these tree posts
like fossels from the past
standing proud of the surface
enabling us to venture
safely across the bay
there's mystery in the place
© Lissie Bull 2014
Imaged titled " So close...So very close......But "
taken by Oli-one and found on DeviantArt.
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Placid tone this write has, Lissie Bull, was reading it lost in the beauty of the scenery and unique phrasing...loved the last line as well which seems to imply that it is a journey only one can take, perhaps a life time? Great narrative and beautiful tone makes this one a favorite...cheers
~~a stilted pathway is spied
meandering in its way
like a stumbling drunkard
on his journey home