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Su Shi: Dream Recall

- Love was when loved each other, translated by Yiyan Han (c) 2020-12-14

Su Shi: Dream Recall

Su Shi (蘇軾, 8 January 1037 – 24 August 1101), courtesy name Zizhan (子瞻), pen name Dongpo (東坡), was a great poet in Song Dynasty. (1)

This is a poem he wrote in 1075, nearly a thousand years ago, to commemorate his beloved wife who died 10 years earlier (2). I translate this into English in an attempt to show the world that love is eternal, and a great poem lives forever ever. The subtitle is added by the translator. Yiyan Han (c) final modification on 2020-12-17

Ten years since thou passed away, in my memory thou forever stay,
though avoiding thinking of thee and the worlds of life and death separate us.
As thy lonely tomb is thousand mile away,
to whom could I express my grief and misery?
Wouldn’t recognise each other even if we met,
with our dusty faces, and hairs that turned grey from black.

In my dream back to the home town, saw thee sit
facing the small window, and dressing up.
We were staring at each other without words,
only with tears gushing out from our eyes.
Imagine thou will be bitterly weeping and longing for me,
year after year, in a moonlit night, on the deserted ridge of pine shrubs.

Footnote:

  1. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Su_Shi
  2. Appreciation in Chinese, for instance, http://www.rocidea.com/one?id=13592  and https://www.secretchina.com/news/b5/2020/12/14/955462.html

2021-02-26:
This poem has now been formally published on Kowloon Collectanea

  • http://kowloondaily.com/2021/02/26/su-shi-dream-recall/

 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

I can feel the love from" phantoms of age" all the way here!....................Jim

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Yiyan Han

Oh yeah, Jim, that's the magic of Love! Thanks you.

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The fish of the sea

Wow Yiyan, you have outdone yourself here. Just filled with that feeling of loneliness. Kudos you talented poet! I love your work. Peace and smiles to you. TFOTS

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Yiyan Han

Yes it's cherishable for all love. Cheers.

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The fish of the sea

Yiyan! I just wanted to say that I love your work. You bring out the fire in poetry that I haven't seen elsewhere. I also wanted to wish you the best over the holidays my friend. Peace and smiles to you always. Kind regards, The Fish of the Sea 

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Yiyan Han

Thank you:
May the Fish of the Sea
get what he needs
May peace and tranquility
be with you Aussie during holiday
and I've bought Yellow Tails for me to enjoy ;-)>

 

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lodigiana

A wonderful representation of the wonders of love! Well done my friend!  Lodigiana xx

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Yiyan Han

Thank you very much, dear lady Lodigiana, and I'm so pleased to see you, to see you, nice! Sincerely wish you have a good holiday. May God's love bring you joy!

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