Suicide Only Hurts The Living
Each day I wake wishing it'd be my last,
I cant see a future or forget the past.
I lock myself away and leave the world behind,
But I've built myself a prison inside my mind.
A cell made from pain and creating walls,
Screams that echo down empty halls.
There's no light in here to guide my way,
So in this hell I am forced to stay.
All I need is to break free,
But no one is coming to rescue me.
I think about how I can end the pain,
Maybe if I died I'd be happy again.
Time goes on and life is short,
Soon I'll be no more than a passing thought.
My pain will pass when I'm dead and gone,
But the pain of my loved ones will linger on.
They say family and friends are very forgiving,
But remember that suicide only hurts the living.
By Daniel Jones
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A well written poem with a very important message. If this is written from experience then stay strong Daniel.
- Syd
Well written with some hard truths hope you're ok
An excellent poem. It's deep and well written.
Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem.
Powerful poetry Daniel, well said.
This one hits home.. For that was me 4 years ago.. Stay true my friend..
WOW!!.... absolute BULLSEYE!!......in every way!!.....PINNED for perfection!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?❤
Wonderful write. Flows gently yet hits the chest with feeling. Beautifully done. Blessings.
wow. absolutely loveloveloveit. it's so deep and speaks truth. That last part tho like it will forever stick in my brain. amazing ✊??
amazing poem ?
definitely a winner on that one
I hope your okay
I lost a friend through suicide so I was touched by this every aspect of your poem is the reality and truth of how these situations are ?
Nothing to say about this your work says it all well done