Sweet Bird of Freedom
Thank you Cherie! you inspired my bird poem!!
Softly float on such temperamental streams,
Drifting in the awe of green pasture.
Avoiding much torment and all capture,
Aviation of the lowest of queens.
Each blustering blow, in so much her stride,
Wavering slightly, yet still staying strong.
Feeling the breeze through feathers so long,
Lifting much higher as she simply glides.
Frightened! Though does not slightly quiver,
With the conviction as fierce as the sea.
No want or need for the scraps does she.
Over waters endless blue river,
Swooping closely to find the best view.
Under the bridges of bleak temptation,
Flying into such pristine narration.
Earnestly flies and continuing through,
following the light and finds her own way.
A sweet contentment, a new place to stay!
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Very nice
Thank you ? x
What a fantastic metaphor.
This whole poem is a testament to how much you've come into your own in the last while; how your remarkable talent has flourished.
It's a joy, a pleasure and a privilege to watch, Lorna...it really is.
This site allows only five stars...but I want to give you so many more!!!
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J xxx
Thank you Jason, I'm happy you like it ?x
Hello L Caizley...
When I think of a bird's life from the hatching of an egg to getting pushed out of a nest high in a tree and flap or die...
Their wings so tiny and to reach adulthood and have babies of their own is quite amazing...
We often fear losing our water wings when we begin to swim...
Great inspired write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Thank you for your comments, I really appreciate them xx
Wow CAIZLEY!!......if you only knew sweet poetess~how perfect the timing was for me to read this.......PINNED.....perhaps I'll private message you some time about it.......thanx so much!!..... fist full-o-STARS .........an awesome write,.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....Txo ?✳✴
whatever timing this was I am glad you timed it right Tony....I am a little intrigued!!
Thanks for your comments..very much appreciated
:) xx
This is beautiful Lorna...You did a wonderful job here....Really enjoyed reading it
Thank you Rose, I happy that you enjoyed it xx
Brilliant Lorna!! a well deserved 5 stars
Thank you Leah, I really appreciate it.
?Xx
Excellent Lorna !
One of your best !!
Regards Mick.
Thanks Mick....I'm really glad you liked it!!
very much appreciated!! xxx
I felt i had wings for a moment.....enjoyed the read...thx
:) thanks Lorris xx
My Dear Lorna,
The eagle has landed, now gone from the hawk
No longer their beaks to squabble and squawk
The pasture is greener, enshrouded in peace
No longer the need, her tears to release
Hugs, Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
My Dear Larry,
You have a distinct ability to reach right to the heart of poetry and draw something beautiful form it.
Lovely, Thank You....all the best to you and yours
Lorna xxx