Poem -

Tea

Tea

A ritualistic extrusion
Brewed in harmony
Fermenting the infusion
Preparing perfectly
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Just a moment's pleasure
Incite yearnings need
An amber stained treasure
Inside the warming knead
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Exactly what's expected
That catch a breath desire
Time which is reflected
Within liquid fortifier
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He looks upon the Tyne
So Grey and Monumental
Though Eastern in design
An English Quintessential

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VladimirMaskva_...

oooooooooooo i love tea, green tea, black tea, brown tea, darjelejinga tea, im glad yu wrote bout my favorite drink besides mt dew, keep on writing homie

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Lorna

Hi Vladimir, Thank you so much for your comment, I wrote this while having a cup of this warming beverage. I appreciate you taking the time to read it
Lorna
:)

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Lorna

Hi John, Glad you liked it, thank you :D
Lorna x

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GREG TUCKER THE...

I could smell the tea, reading your words.Β  Awesome!Β  I hate tea and prefer coffee but I love this poem!

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Lorna

Hi Gregory, I drink both depending on my mood, thanks for reading
Lorna :DΒ 

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Jason Brown

A ritualistic extrusion

This is probably the most ENGLISH poem you've ever written darling. The imagery is oddly sensual and seems to imply a particularly tactile approach to making (to "knead"...an especially illuminating homonym!!) the tea.
And the patriotic hat-tip to Charles Earl Grey is very funny and clever.

I love it ... and you {Though I'm rather ambivalent towards tea...as you know!}

your Jason XxXxXxXx

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Lorna

Hi Sweetheart, Thank yo so much for your lovely comments on my work, Glad you noticed the little mention of Earl Grey, I am so excited to see you TODAY!!!!!
SEE you this afternoonΒ 
Your Lorna xxxx

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Lorna

Thanks Johnathan, I appreciate you reading my poem :D
Lorna

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Donna Walton

I absolutely loved this..... Almost as much as I love a good cuppa lol.xo

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Lorna

Hi Donna, sometimes their's nothing better than a good cuppa :D
Thanks for your comment
Lorna X

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Donna Walton

You are most welcome. Now put that kettle on lol,xo

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Lorna

Ok you bring the cake!! Haha
Lorna
X

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Larry Ran

My Dear Lorna,

I'm late, I'm late
For a very important date
I have to post this limerick
For my poetic sweet soulmate

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Thank you our dear Earl Grey
For bringing this delicious brew our way
It's brought us countless pleasure
A cup or two in measure
We drink at Tea Time every day

.
Love You,
Larry xxx

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Lorna

Hello My Lovely poetic friend Larry,
Your Limerick made me smile
here's one for you

A poetic response that causes a smile
It comes from his heart, and goes the full mile
his kindness does show
As his words they do flow
With a grand unrepeatable style

Thank You
All my loveΒ 
Lorna xx

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Larry Ran

A response to my comment has brought me such joy
From a woman of beauty, like Helen of Troy
Her heartwarming quips
Have launched one thousand ships
It sailed to the soul of this boy

All my love,
Larry xxx

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Lorna

Hi Larry, Thank you, you brightened my day
All my LoveΒ 
Lorna
xxx

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lodigiana

Hi Lorna, a girl after my own heart....Tea! Tea! Tea! I just love it. Loved your pieceΒ  and will be re reading it whilst imbibing!!Β 

Lodigiana xxx

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Lorna

Hi Lodigiana, Thanks for the comment, yes tea is definitely a national treasure here hahaha
I'll see who I too can spookΒ 
Lorna xxx

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Shaun Cronick

Hey Lorna, I'm a bit late finding this but your poem will never get cold.
Love it! And just like a good cuppa, so refreshing, relaxing and that sense of well being after reading.
Thanks Lorna for sharing your enjoyable pick me up poem.
Shaun. x.

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Neville

This is most assuredly my most favouwritest of your poems that I have read to date Lorna .. indeed I am something of a connoisseur when it comes to tea x

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