Poem -
Tea
A ritualistic extrusion
Brewed in harmony
Fermenting the infusion
Preparing perfectly
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Just a moment's pleasure
Incite yearnings need
An amber stained treasure
Inside the warming knead
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Exactly what's expected
That catch a breath desire
Time which is reflected
Within liquid fortifier
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He looks upon the Tyne
So Grey and Monumental
Though Eastern in design
An English Quintessential
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Comments
oooooooooooo i love tea, green tea, black tea, brown tea, darjelejinga tea, im glad yu wrote bout my favorite drink besides mt dew, keep on writing homie
Hi Vladimir, Thank you so much for your comment, I wrote this while having a cup of this warming beverage. I appreciate you taking the time to read it
Lorna
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Excellent Lorna! Love it!
much love.
Hi John, Glad you liked it, thank you :D
Lorna x
I could smell the tea, reading your words.Β Awesome!Β I hate tea and prefer coffee but I love this poem!
Hi Gregory, I drink both depending on my mood, thanks for reading
Lorna :DΒ
This is probably the most ENGLISH poem you've ever written darling. The imagery is oddly sensual and seems to imply a particularly tactile approach to making (to "knead"...an especially illuminating homonym!!) the tea.
And the patriotic hat-tip to Charles Earl Grey is very funny and clever.
I love it ... and you {Though I'm rather ambivalent towards tea...as you know!}
your Jason XxXxXxXx
Hi Sweetheart, Thank yo so much for your lovely comments on my work, Glad you noticed the little mention of Earl Grey, I am so excited to see you TODAY!!!!!
SEE you this afternoonΒ
Your Lorna xxxx
Great poem really i liked it alot
Thanks Johnathan, I appreciate you reading my poem :D
Lorna
I absolutely loved this..... Almost as much as I love a good cuppa lol.xo
Hi Donna, sometimes their's nothing better than a good cuppa :D
Thanks for your comment
Lorna X
You are most welcome. Now put that kettle on lol,xo
Ok you bring the cake!! Haha
Lorna
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Baking as we speak lol.xo
My Dear Lorna,
I'm late, I'm late
For a very important date
I have to post this limerick
For my poetic sweet soulmate
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Thank you our dear Earl Grey
For bringing this delicious brew our way
It's brought us countless pleasure
A cup or two in measure
We drink at Tea Time every day
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Love You,
Larry xxx
Hello My Lovely poetic friend Larry,
Your Limerick made me smile
here's one for you
A poetic response that causes a smile
It comes from his heart, and goes the full mile
his kindness does show
As his words they do flow
With a grand unrepeatable style
Thank You
All my loveΒ
Lorna xx
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A response to my comment has brought me such joy
From a woman of beauty, like Helen of Troy
Her heartwarming quips
Have launched one thousand ships
It sailed to the soul of this boy
All my love,
Larry xxx
Hi Larry, Thank you, you brightened my day
All my LoveΒ
Lorna
xxx
Hi Lorna, a girl after my own heart....Tea! Tea! Tea! I just love it. Loved your pieceΒ and will be re reading it whilst imbibing!!Β
Lodigiana xxx
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Hi Lodigiana, Thanks for the comment, yes tea is definitely a national treasure here hahaha
I'll see who I too can spookΒ
Lorna xxx
Hey Lorna, I'm a bit late finding this but your poem will never get cold.
Love it! And just like a good cuppa, so refreshing, relaxing and that sense of well being after reading.
Thanks Lorna for sharing your enjoyable pick me up poem.
Shaun. x.
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This is most assuredly my most favouwritest of your poems that I have read to date Lorna .. indeed I am something of a connoisseur when it comes to tea x