Poem -
Teardrop
Dainty teardrop, so very crystal clear
Falling slowly, down the softest of cheeks
Filled with such primal and emotive fear
From sparkling green eyes, the water leaks.
Glistening within, such moments of still,
Drawn from those memories, ever so deep.
Falling always down, very much at will
Welling up, from within the ducts you creep
Oh, Dainty teardrop, single little pearl,
more tears emerging, flowing into lakes.
Overspilling, with a mighty unfurl,
Providing solace to a heart that breaks.
When flood subsides, the emotion still stays
Bringing new transformation through weary haze.
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This is a day for celebration andΒ joy!! ??????
It's beautiful, Lorna. Absolutely exquisite!!!
The imagery is sad, sweet and tenderly rendered.
But the REALLY excellent aspect is how you use irregular (trochaic) feet to upset the flow andΒ rhythm of several lines; echoing the sobs of someone weeping. A masterstroke!!
Colour me IMPRESSED!!!
J xxx
such kind words i'm glad you liked it xxΒ
If I see it...I call it.
J xxx
beautiful ink Lorna!
Thank you Lisa xx
Excellent
Good
Love it
All smiles
Who gives a ............
Thanks Lorris, very much appreciated xx
Deeply moving, emotional write.
Great poem.
Take care. Β :)
Thank you xx
Thank you for sharing ! Β x
Hi Lorna A beautiful writeΒ
and very movingΒ
Best wishes Debs x
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Thank you, that's very kind ?