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THE HONKYTONK DOG

Deep in the woods
of Kentucky is a
little bar, laying on
the floor by the door
is dog, his owner
sits at the bar drinking
whiskey and gin she
would laugh and cry
and sing at every song

Then one day she died
and the dog waited on the floor
by the door for her by day he would sleep
by night he would go to all the girls
they gave him food and whiskey and gin
he barked at all the singers and kiss all
girls and now he is honkytonk dog

then one day
the dog died
and on is grave
they put here
lies the honkytonk dog

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A Lonely Journey

Gerg, 
Loved it, my friend! It's sad, but it's also so telling of the wonderful nature of animals, and particularly dogs. I'm a huge dog person(not a huge person, but huge fan of dogs), and often(but don't tell any people I said this), I say that they're so much better than people to be around. 
Really enjoyed your write. 
Great job. 
M. 

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Greg Etsell

Thank you yes it’s sad 
don’t you think this could be song
a  Country song  I have a country singer in mind  but if I send it to her I know she won’t do anything about it I tried once before with her with  song I wrote  her name is Tyler Lynn

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Marion

Aw Greg, anything to do with animals makes me cry even if it's a happy tale...my first tears of the day, lovely work ??

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Larry Ran

My Dear Greg,

A lovely poem, with such a sad ending.  Of course, as we know, poor dogs were not given long enough lives.
By the way, I dated a "Honky Tonk Woman" from Kentucky once, but she was certainly no dog.

Love,
Larry xxx

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Greg Etsell

 Thank you Larry Can we have a drum roll for Larry please thank you

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Tony Taylor

QUITE clever dear poet brother!!......I can see the whole thing in my minds eye!!.... It has long-lasting poetic imagery running throughout this powerfully graphic write!!........ALL STARS!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......Txo.  : )

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Tony 
dont you think this
could be song
A country song 

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Greg Etsell

i think this a great poem or song 
what do you all think 

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Jill Tait

Awwww how lovely together forevermore đź’•đź’•

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