Poem -
The Kiss
Kiss me
Like I was your first love
Tender and hesitant
Exploring the return of passion
In a fresh burst of desire
Like twenty year olds
Forget the past
Drown in this moment
Do not be surprised
If you feel as if you
Are trapped in pleasure
Almost dying in sensuality
The extent of chemistry
Is utterly amazing
As my breath is stopped
My voice is breath
I become engulfed
In you
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Comments
Hi Dagnis, I hope you are very well. Very powerful emotions captured in this wonderful piece of writing. I would say that any truly passionate, intense person would find this mesmerising. Beautiful writing and a joy to read. Thank you.
Hi Tony,
I am doing very well considering all things. How areyou doing?
I enjoyed the comment as it made me smile.
Thank you so much.
Dagnis Teernin
Hi Dagnis, I´m very well too, wonderful talent for writing that you have in creating very real emotions and imagery. Great to know the comment made you smile. :)
Wonderful! Really powerful and passionate writing. I cannot understand why you do not have more comments. This is a fabulous poem x
Thank you! What a nice thought. I am a newbie to this forum so
perhaps a following is required.. I am happy with the wonderful peers I have
met with so far.. and I am glad to be here...
namaste
Dagnis