The Peak
A new endeavor tickles the brain,
causing curiosity to PIQUE,
appealing strongly to the senses,
but the motivational force is weak.
Like a car idling motionless,
the idea remains out of gear;
then desire brings forth impetus...
overcoming initial fear.
How difficult can this really be?
Let's take a closer PEEK...
Once the path is more apparent,
forward motion seems less bleak.
Each success amidst the journey
reveals confidence gaining steam,
- hesitation now unchained -
body and mind a united team.
The destination lies in view,
as the dreamer continues the ascent;
courage now in full control
with no signs it might relent.
The learning curve now mastered,
strength exuding from the once weak,
as the conqueror emerges victorious
reaching the summit, the final PEAK.
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Comments
Always appreciate your perspective, Cherie, and that you "get" my work! Thanks for the valued feedback!*!*! One step can be the beginning of something new and wonderful in life! Blessings...
Jacki
nice write
Thanks so much, Susan! I don't consider this even close to my best but the different uses of "peak" struck me so tried something a bit different. Appreciate the feedback - happy writing!*!*!
Jacki
A write of distinction motivationally presented with a sense of purpose and drive to inspire.
Your capabilities as a writer/poet always shine through in dramatic fashion !
Blessings to you.
Hug. x
Awww...thanks, Richard!! Very different spin for me but had fun with it! It's always great to hear from you. Appreciate the kind words and support!*!*! Hope your summer is going great! Excited about a piece I'm finalizing to put out here...almost done with it...
Blessings & happy writing!
Jacki
Hoping you are having a great summer too !!
Thanks for the kind words.
Thanks for sharing your craft and graft.
Take care. Hug. :)
:) Many blessings....
:) All the best to you !