Poem -
The Taking of Innocence
it takes a lot to make me angry, but every now & then, I get very angry indeed ...
The Taking of Innocence
Beneath that now
famous
cheesecloth dress
Their
scattered DNA
suggests
She tried so very
hard
to cross her legs
and
hold her breath ..
Not having
once ever dreamt
of being
forced to kiss
through clenched
fists and
teeth like that before ..
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Comments
Neville this is a skilful write. You capture the violation felt when such a sickening act is forced on another. Never an easy thing to write about. You do a good service, highlighting such an horrible act on another human being
Gwen x
this was just a little too close to home to remain wholly objective from a clinical point of view .. hence my formal request to be allowed some special dispensation ........................ poetic license was not dispensed with however and I dont mind admitting, I still feel both personally violated and angry ...................................................................... N x
Oh Neville you make my eyes well. The world can have some sick people walking amongst us. I am so sorry my friend ❤️
Wishing you love and light this Christmas, may you be surrounded by good company from those who truly love you
Gwen x
thank you & back at you too Gwen .. x
Note to self .... Don't make Neville angry ..... I agree with what Gwen said above and the structure definitely added to the drama I felt as I read it.
Note to self noted Robert & I sincerely thank you for visiting these words sir ..
Personally, I am particularly adverse to unnecessary drama's .. but well crises, now they are another matter altogether & where I tend to earn my crust ................ N
p.s.
Seasonal Best Wishes & All Good Things to you & yours
You are such a skilled poet x
such flattery will get you anywhere ... just name it .. x
Hahaha...seriously, though, you really are a very, very skilled poet. Truth not flattery x
I owe you one Tina .. bless you n truly tooly :) x