Poem - 12 February 2018, 09:40

The Un-Haiku

Robert F

Haiku sound so mismatched
odd numbered syllables don’t mix.
so this goes six, eight, six.

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ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐12 February 2018, 10:22

Very clever ink

Robert F14 February 2018, 03:44

Thanks so much.

lodigiana14 February 2018, 00:27

So original Robert! Love this...I feel there is a bit of an anarchist hidden within that poetic soul..perfect! Nice work.
Lodigiana

Robert F14 February 2018, 03:45

Yeah, this was one of my favorites. Glad you like it.

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