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Seated on the Wing

Seated on the Wing

On the edge of a wingย I am seated.

Looking at lifeย through a heavenly view.

Wishing you could see this awe filled anew.

Knowing itโ€™s hard, to not feel defeated.

My place is now as it was, around you.

Looking with a fresh new perspective,

Wishing you too, could see life's objective.

Knowing Itโ€™s oftenย you're feeling so blue.

See me settled, on the edge of this wing,

Looking to glimpse me once more;ย Iโ€™m here!

Wishing you could always,feel me this near.

Knowing itโ€™s not easy, to hear angels sing.

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Jason Brown

Such heart...such generosity of spirit.
Such a work...resonant with both.

Lovely Lorna.

J xxx

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Lorna

Thanks Jason :) x

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The Bee

Seeing the world from theย quiet and tranquillity of a wing far above, leaves me so much at peaceย  Beautiful work, enjoyed so muchย  xox :-)

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Lorna

Thanks Bee, I really appreciate you comments xx :)

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Richard Waters

To find the angel that cares for you and brings hope, joy and peace is the defining moment of an existence. This special work acknowledges that moment where the comfort and warmth of the loving wing is embraced and everything is viewed afresh.

Stunning poetry !

Warmest wishes to you ! ย xx ย :)

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Lorna

thanks Richard, your words are very kind I appreciate them a lot x :)ย 

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Leah Yodico

I believe in angels!!! ย I have images of them everywhere in my house.ย 

Lovely to read poem!!ย 

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Lorna

Thank you Leah x

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Mizzy ......

Heavenly poem Lorna......beautifully written !

Mick.

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Lorna

thank you so much Mick, I really appreciate it xx ย 

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Christopher Correia

your words fall like sweet reassurance to a troubled heart....a steady principled strong hold or a lighthouse to guide through the storm turbulent sea....this is a very inspiring poem, my friend, it truly speaks to the readerย inย images and emotions, you really caught something here, terrific poemย 

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Lorna

Oh wow!! Thank you so much, I'm truly glad you enjoyed it :)

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Shaun Cronick

The sad loss of anyone close is never easy and even harder when one of those who have passed is a family member.
Your beautiful poem offers a safe haven for those who experience grief and distress after a loved one's demise.
Gone but never forgotten.
Wonderful writing yet again Lorna and anything positive does help, no matter how small, those afflicted.
Shaun xx

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Lorna

Shaun...You have been busy!!ย 
thanks for reading this oneย 
I'm glad you liked it
Love Lorna xx
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