Poem -
Think of me in Snow
Think of Me in Snow
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While wintry winds bequeath their icy chill,
Β faint fires in our hearts burn ferventβbright.
Long shadows dance upon the floor, until
our home is warm, so cozyβsheer delight.
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Our breathless whispers speak of restless grace;
sustains our longing, stokes pure passions' flame.
Each cleft and crevice of your lovely face
is shaded in soft shadows' murky frame.
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Although our time remaining now grows short,
thereβs no place than right here Iβd rather be.
Itβs times like these our aging hearts cavort.
One day weβll stay like this, eternally.
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Should I be called, my love, before you go,
Iβll send my kiss in downy flakes of snow.
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Comments
an amazingly romantic write.Β
Thanks so much, Lisa.
I'm really glad that you enjoyed the read.
Horror Hugs!
~DeanΒ :}
Beautifully written Dean, quality.
I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on this piece, Gerard.
I'm truly grateful for the positive feedback.
Much obliged,
~Dean
Whoaaa what a romantic soul... two of a kind we are!!! Brilliant write dear friend!!!! Cheers, Happy Jack
Thanks a million, Jack. I sincerely appreciate your R & R.
~Dean
You're very kind, Cherie and I am so pleased to know that you enjoyed this. I don't often write romantic poetry. But for some reason something inspired me to write this today.
Thanks so much again!
~Dean
Excellent ??? so eloquently written, oh how to feel them flakes... ???Β
It would really be nice to feel them, wouldn't it, Wayne?
I deeply appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on Think of me in Snow.
I'm very grateful for your encouraging comments.
Here's hoping you have a fantastic weekend, Wayne.
Thanks again for reading!
~Dean
Not a problem, it's a pleasure to read such beauty...Β
you too have a good weekend! βΊ
Absolutely beautiful, the imagery left me speechless. You were right when you said we share the same sense of descriptive style.Β
With love, dear poet x
Thank you very much for reading and commenting on my sonnet.
I deeply appreciate your insights and input.
Have a fantastic weekend!
~DeanΒ :}
Hard to find room,
so much said,
for a write from the heart
not just the head
a Love we all long for
that ages with grace
til one only whispers
their love in snow flakes
great great read!
made my dayΒ
thanks
john
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Thank you so much for not only reading my sonnet, John, but for the excellent poetic response as well.
I sincerely appreciate it!
~DeanΒ :}