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FRUSTRATION (acrostic)

FRUSTRATION (acrostic)

FRUSTRATION,

Future: Seems for ever, I have no control
Release: On licence... Always on parole 
Understanding: How life will be for you
Saddened: A teenager I never even knew
Trapped: For months...and years yet to come
Restriction; that lost visit for something you have done
Addiction; yes I know you're not the only one
Temptation: how long? Has it really gone?
Intuition, 
Of a mother, does everything she can
Next time I see you my child... You will be a man 

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Maddison Law

Thank you Keith, thank you for time

maddison

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Maddison Law

Thank you for your time ( it should say !)
Maddison

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Black Reign

Excellent piece Maddison..I am all to familiar with....5 stars from me ...well deserved...Michael

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Maddison Law

Thanks Michael, means a lot when someone understands how you feel
Maddison

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Rachel Hughes

thank you for sharing your poem it excellently written.

You have my vote.

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Great write. Congrats

Of a mother, does everything she can
Next time I see you my child... You will be a man 

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Carey Milton

I know you my friend!...Well done!..Acrostics as you probably know are a fave of mine..Your poem FRUSTRATION is more than devine...I feel your words as you do time...xxxx

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Maddison Law

Thank Carey, congratulations on becoming council, you truly deserve it !
Maddison

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Carey Milton

Maddison..X

Your saying I truly deserve council means more than words will ever say...

I have fought my entire life to achieve something for myself that I had an uncontrollable passion for..And I finally made that happen...

I mean every word....I value your words so much hun! x

I can't wait to read more of your work...I hear you babes! x

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Maddison Law

Thank you Carey for support always x
Maddison

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Maddison Law

Thank you Carey for support always x
Maddison

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Jimmy Arnold

Hello Maddison,

Another well written poem.. Acrostics aren't easy pieces to sculpt but you did quite well with this, i placed one are two, on my site as well and i commend you, wholeheartedly...Lines of interest:

Addiction; yes I know you're not the only one
Temptation: how long? Has it really gone?
Intuition, 
Of a mother, does everything she can
Next time I see you my child... You will be a man 

Jim 

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Maddison Law

Thank you again for taking such time to read my poems and leave such valuable comments

Truly means alot

madfison

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Jimmy Arnold

Madison you are more than welcome and you truly have an assortment of gifts and one of them, is your wonderful talent, at writing beautiful poetry, don't ever stop, you have acquired to many hungry readers setting patiently at your table ready to ingest your magical literary works....

Take Care, your friend,

Jim  

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