FRUSTRATION (acrostic)

FRUSTRATION,
Future: Seems for ever, I have no control
Release: On licence... Always on parole
Understanding: How life will be for you
Saddened: A teenager I never even knew
Trapped: For months...and years yet to come
Restriction; that lost visit for something you have done
Addiction; yes I know you're not the only one
Temptation: how long? Has it really gone?
Intuition,
Of a mother, does everything she can
Next time I see you my child... You will be a man

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Comments
Really nice write!
*Keith
Thank you Keith, thank you for time
maddison
Thank you for your time ( it should say !)
Maddison
Excellent piece Maddison..I am all to familiar with....5 stars from me ...well deserved...Michael
Thanks Michael, means a lot when someone understands how you feel
Maddison
thank you for sharing your poem it excellently written.
You have my vote.
Thank you Rachel,thank you for reading
Great write. Congrats
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you for your kind words x
I know you my friend!...Well done!..Acrostics as you probably know are a fave of mine..Your poem FRUSTRATION is more than devine...I feel your words as you do time...xxxx
Thank Carey, congratulations on becoming council, you truly deserve it !
Maddison
Maddison..X
Your saying I truly deserve council means more than words will ever say...
I have fought my entire life to achieve something for myself that I had an uncontrollable passion for..And I finally made that happen...
I mean every word....I value your words so much hun! x
I can't wait to read more of your work...I hear you babes! x
Thank you Carey for support always x
Maddison
Thank you Carey for support always x
Maddison
Hello Maddison,
Another well written poem.. Acrostics aren't easy pieces to sculpt but you did quite well with this, i placed one are two, on my site as well and i commend you, wholeheartedly...Lines of interest:
Addiction; yes I know you're not the only one
Temptation: how long? Has it really gone?
Intuition,
Of a mother, does everything she can
Next time I see you my child... You will be a man
Jim
Thank you again for taking such time to read my poems and leave such valuable comments
Truly means alot
madfison
Jim,
sorry! Should say
Maddison :)
Madison you are more than welcome and you truly have an assortment of gifts and one of them, is your wonderful talent, at writing beautiful poetry, don't ever stop, you have acquired to many hungry readers setting patiently at your table ready to ingest your magical literary works....
Take Care, your friend,
Jim