Poem -
TORN APART....
How can I fix something so broke?
I'm struggling.....
So much to mend.
The obstacles to get to you
Send me crashing to an end....
Every day I try to cope
With all that's thrown at me
Draining my soul
A deep, dark hole....
This void is plain to see
I need you back here in my arms
Where I won't let you go
Safe and happy you would be
Giving you the best chance to grow.
One day I'll get to tell you
I love you so!...
I won't let go!
These tears I cry each and every day
A pain I try hard not to show..
I miss you so much Dylan
More than you will ever know.
xx
Carey Milton ©
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Amazing and alluring write dear Carey Milton, The image attached to the poem is excellentÂ
My applause, My love, My vote, reserved for my POET'S PEN
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
A very tearful piece for me to write so I truly appreciate you reading my words from the heart :)
Thanks Willy
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Thanks dear Carey Milton, I shall be picking all your emotional verse to be featured in my POET'S PEN with your kind permission, They are amazing verses.
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
What a beautiful pleading love, you are an adoring soul Carey, often the obstacle are plenty because the time and place of this love is tested, one more ready willingly loving and one uncertain withholding love, time heals all, time bares all, stay strong princess love always conquers all, often a little time brings all clarity and content from mind and heart together making it not a decision but a need for that love, without it no breaths breathed xoxo much love to you sweet girl, nardine xoxo
Nardine .. I am completely touched that you found the time to give me such beautiful feedback with your words of support!
Now and then I decide to throw a little bit more of me out into the world and its a very empowering experience when someone on the other side catches those bits!
P.S. I had to check out your profile neighbour ...Hahaha
Love from Melbs :P
Thanks beautiful...:)xx
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Hey gorgeous, your welcome, i completely get the hardship upon this write sweetie, would have been so emotional for you, but you did it princess, I'm glad you felt empowered, i find writing releases so much giving room for happiness to grow, I'm proud of you, letting it out, yes we are very much neighbours, i can see Melbourne from across the bay where i live, so I'm never to fare if you ever need me, love to you , well done again on an amazing write from the deepest depths of your beautiful heart, Nardine xoxo
Beautiful emotive write Carey