Poem -
Touch Me
Touch me without using your hands
Touch me like never before
My heart skips when you to that
Touch me in those hidden places, I implore
Time freezes when you do that
Touch me with words I abhor
My knees melt when you do that
Touch me where only whispering ain't ignored
I lose control when you do that
Touch me....that I crave for and adore
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Yaaay!!!...It's so exciting to know your opinion on my Romantic writes...I know how passionate you are on Love and Romance.....and I've learnt so much from you.... Thanks for always being there...smiles....high fives! Love n hugs
ROES MY WINDOW IS OPEN AND YOUR POEM BLOW IN AND TOUCH ME IT WAS SUCH A GREAT FEELING WHAT GREAT POEM GREAT WRITE PEACE AND LOVE TO YOU HUGS XXOO
I'm glad it found your window open....Thanks for your kind words...They mean so much to me
Hugs:) xxoo
Hey Flower....thanks so much....I'm thrilled to know you think I'm getting better....I appreciate your words....hugs so:)
Hi Rose, lovely little poem her quite sensual, my only critique is there are a few mis spelt words or words that should be something else.
Hi Jeff....Thanks for stopping by....What are those words? So that I can correct them.....Thanks so much
Hugs:)
Touch me where words I abhor (with not where)
My knees melt when you to that (do that, not to that)Β
if i'm wrong i apologize.Β
jeff
Got it...Corrected....Typo:) and I didn't notice...I'm glad you did...Thanks so much
sorry rose, i wasn't being cheeky lol. reads loads better now lolΒ
cheers jeff
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Not at all Jeff....lol....you did the right thing....Iike I said earlier, I'm glad you noticed.....it goes to show that you really read better now (No pun intended)....lol....Thanks a million...It's a pleasure having you here
Lot of love
Hi Β Rose Lovely little write, sensual
and seductiveΒ
well written i enjoyedΒ
lots of love DebsΒ
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Thanks so much Debs....Trying my hands on romance once in a while...I'm thrilled to know you enjoyed it....Thanks for always being there.
Lots of love
Aww sweet Rose this most breathtakingly beautiful
Thanks so much Poetess...I appreciate
Hi Sweet Rose,
The touch of love requires only one's heart and soul to ensconce their eternal mate with the warmth and passion that only they can generate.
Hugs, Peace and Love,
xox Larry
The touch of love is more than the physical touch...Welcome back Sweet Larry...I've missed your presence on COSMO
Lots of love
Hey Rose! Just me stopping in. I love this poem! It is so filled with sensuality. I hope your not offended, but I did not understand the use of the word abhor? That means to hate......or in disgust of something...so not sure why or how he could touch you in a romantic way with words you hate...or that disgust you...wouldn't that turn you off? Sure it was probably a typo, but wanted to let you know. The poem is awesome overall though. You are a good writer Rose. I enjoy reading your work.Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Paula
Hey Paula...It's a pleasure to have you stop by.....Nope I'm not offended.....I love corrections... Well, not typo....I was actually imagining a scenario where no need for words....but may be whispering... Don't know if you get my drift? But can still change it if you still feel it doesn't make sense.Thanks so much..for enjoying my work....I appreciate
Lots of love
Oh mercy...no Rose....don't change your meaning for me! It is your poem, and as I stated earlier, I loved it! Just thought it was a typo or other.....if the word "abhor" makes your meaning clear, as to what you wish to convey as the meaning,Β than you should leave it Rose! Have a wonderful weekend......HugsΒ Paula