Poem -
~Trance~
The stars in the sky,
cause me to wonder why.
Why do I love you so,
It should be for me to know.
Like the summer breeze,
Why can't my heart freeze?
The heat flowing in my blood,
I can feel the way I've loved.
It is no simple task as this,
To love you with such bliss.
The world spins around,
I am falling to the ground.
I can't keep my balance,
You have me in a trance.
It began from the start,
When you first stole my heart.
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Comments
Dear Poet Sister MEGAN!!
This is a very compellingly rhythmical write....... with such timing in your metering I can hear this as a lyric line.....VERY easily formed into a song...,,with Love at the core..... it's perfect as a song lyric...... regardless, it is a VERY well crafted poem!!....... on the kind of love that transports!!.......ALL STARS!!..... well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!....... and....... WELCOME to COSMO!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ????
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Thank you kindly. I am over the moon with your kind words. It means a great deal to me to see that my poems effect others so. I am glad you enjoyed. This will help with my continued desire to write more.