Poem -
Un-awake
A vision engulfed in laughter and smiles.
Dance in the sunshine, splash in coolest ocean.
avert gaze from the deep darkest trials.
As depth starts a spinning, drink down its sour potion.
A place to just visit, knowing that joy's fleeting.
Seems nevereneding, a dream or awake.
Where darkness awaits its next little meeting
please open your eyes before it's too late.
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Comments
Beautifully saidΒ :)
Thank you, I appreciate your wordsΒ
lorna x
Always x
I am glad to see you here and hope to read a lot more. Very well done!
Thanks lisa, I haven't been writing much lately, hopefully I've found my words.again
lorna xx
A brilliant title & no one is gonna fall asleep reading it either .. I dont know whether it was intentional, but I keep getting flashes of what might have been a subliminal message incorporated .. N x
Hi Neville,
Thanks for your kind words, its actually written about and not long after a dream I had while being very poorly. I think all poetry is subliminal to the writer and interpretedΒ by sensitivity of the reader.
Thanks for your feedback
Lorna xxx
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That figures .. am deliriouslyΒ glad you are now feeling better Lorna :) xx
you write beautiful things...
Thank you August, I appreciate your kind words
lorna x