Untilβ¦
From my birdβs eye view through the cottage on the shore-
I listen to the clanking warning bells, and watch the eagleβs soar-
Sail your boat into safe harbour where it's calm and it is still...
I'll be waiting at the waterβs edge, I'll be waiting there until;
you come into the shallows, put down your nets and rest-
Weary, ravaged and tired from your long and arduous quest-
Sail your boat into safe harbour where it's calm and it is still...
I'll be waiting at the waterβs edge, I'll be waiting there until;
the mist is rolling in, the horizonΒ is stolen from my view-
Stormy seas swirl and swell and the raging wind, it blew-
Sail your boat into safe harbour where it's calm and it is still...
I'll be waiting at the waterβs edge, I'll be waiting there until...
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Hey CARON!!.....a VERY cleverly delivered write....... the repetition works well inΒ resting the feel of being near the water....... along with the two line stanza's you've created anticipation beautifully here......., you've got skills my friend....... and they just keep gettin' better!!!......ALL STARS!!....... lovely read!!........ LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo.Β ?
Thank you Tony! I always appreciate your comments! Yes, this poem was a little different to my others, I thought I'd try something a little different.Β Best wishes Caron xx
wonderful write Caron, your work is always thought out and inspiring.
Very kind, thank you Lisa! Best wishes Caron xx